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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by earlybird-obi-wan, Jan 1, 2008.

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  1. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Diary of a young healer
    Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
    Timeframe: intertrillogy -ROTJ
    Characters: Marhin Adin, Oc's
    Genre: diary
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    Summary: Marhin Adin writes in his diary
    Disclaimer: Star Wars = George Lucas.


    Entry 1

    My name is Marhin Adin and I am the son of Kaagi and Arianna Adin. I am 11 years old and living in a nice cottage situated on the large estate of Eled-Hir on the planet Moniron.
    Yesterday I got this new diary from my father because I have started to follow in his footsteps.
    I will become a healer like him.
    My father was a healer in the Jeditemple and he fled just before the temple was destroyed almost 19 years ago
    My mother was born here.
    I have many friends at school and at the estate.
    I will tell you about them
    Oops: school is starting
    I will be back.
     
  2. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I will become a healer like him.

    I'm sure his father will be proud to see his son follow in his footsteps.

    Please PM me when you update

    Looking forward to more

    =D==D= =D= =D=
     
  3. mavjade

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    Wonderful first entry!!

    I've got a soft spot in my heart for healers and I love that this is a child that is gonna be a healer!!

    I'm excited for more!

    If you do a PM list could I be on it please? [face_batting]
     
  4. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    I'm intrigued. I like the voice of innocence mixed with the honesty that only a youngling ;) can provide. Being a healer in training opens the way for many adventures :cool: I'd love PMs please? :D
     
  5. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Kelia posted: I will become a healer like him.

    I'm sure his father will be proud to see his son follow in his footsteps.

    Please PM me when you update

    Looking forward to more


    Mavjade posted: Wonderful first entry!!

    I've got a soft spot in my heart for healers and I love that this is a child that is gonna be a healer!!

    I'm excited for more!

    If you do a PM list could I be on it please?



    PM's are sent and thanks for your support[:D]

    Entry 2

    School was nice today with the first lessons in anatomy by master Henrani Elenion.
    He is the father of Lenwe and Alwin.

    Alwin was raised at the Jeditemple because he was recued from slavery by master Yoda, Obi-Wan Kenobi and Qui-Gon Jinn. After he was born, an evil woman took him away and told his parents that he had died after birth.

    The Jedi could save him and because no one knew who his parents were and because he was Force sensitive he was admitted to Jedi-training. What the Jedi didn?t know was that he is a Dunai elder and they are all Force users. And Dunai elder age differently and Alwin was with 13 years still clumsy and no Master took him as a padawan-learner. 13 is the age you have to be taken as a padawan and Alwin left with Magin Bhik to the agricorps.

    Alwin met firefighters on Alderaan and after the Jedipurge he took refuge in the house of firechief Mick Robi in the small village of Alladea.

    His son Luciano Robi also fled Coruscant with his childhood friend Boyd Vienar.

    Luciano trained Alwin to become a firefighter and they ended up here on Moniron after a meeting with Obi-Wan Kenobi on Tatooine. That was almost 4 years ago.

    Hm, I have to hurry. Alwin is starting with his exercises for the firefighters and that is fun to watch.

    tbc-
     
  6. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    It is interesting to see another slave-boy going his way. How different fates can be! Thanks, dear bird!

    *is listening to Herman Van Veen singing "Klacht" now!*

    Well, I can NOT complain about that new fanfic here!
     
  7. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Nice connection to canon characters in this entry =D= Very natural tone to the diarist's voice here--being fascinated with well known Jedi and firefighters ;) & thanks for PM :D
     
  8. KELIA

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    It's too bad the Jedi didn't know of Alwin's different aging/maturing status.

    I would hope they would have given him more time if they had.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  9. mavjade

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    Nice update!! =D=

    I really like the voice of the writer!
    I loved the last line, it was really cute!

    Thanks for the PM and I'm sorry it took me so long to review!
     
  10. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    AzureAngel2 posted: It is interesting to see another slave-boy going his way. How different fates can be! Thanks, dear bird!

    *is listening to Herman Van Veen singing "Klacht" now!*

    Well, I can NOT complain about that new fanfic here!

    I know those songs too and I like them.


    He will hear about many canon characters.

    Kelia posted: It's too bad the Jedi didn't know of Alwin's different aging/maturing status.

    I would hope they would have given him more time if they had.

    Great update

    No they didn't know and only on Moniron they discovered who Alwin was.

    Mavjade posted: Nice update!!

    I really like the voice of the writer!
    I loved the last line, it was really cute!

    Thanks for reading and here is the next chapter.

    Entry 3

    Alwin told the firefighters of storms and the dangers they give to firefighters.

    Trees can snap like twigs and fires can become unmanagable and if you have a big fire the fire itself can create a firestorm.

    Alwin demonstrated how to use a chainsaw and my father came to get me for diner.

    Mom said when she saw us that we both were dirty.

    Dad gave her an impish smile as always and yes, he is always dirty. He wipes his greasy hands on his healer?s robes and I have heard from Master Aaqu that he had done that since he became a therapist at the Jeditemple.

    I was dirty because I had watched the firefighters and mum sent us both to the fresher.

    Scrubbed clean we could take a seat at the kitchentable and mom had made berry-pie as a dessert.

    I helped her with the dishes and after that I went to the livingroom and Dad inserted one of those holo?s from the Owl in the player.

    That was again funny to watch and I remember when I was younger and telling master Aaqu that I had found the missing tool of Mr. Beaver. The wrench was from Luciano and he got it back after Master Aaqu told me the entire story.

    And as the holo was coming to its end I heard again ?beaks closed and eyes shut.?

    Mom said bedtime Marhin and so it is bye diary.

     
  11. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Cute fun update. :) Berry pie-- berry anything [face_laugh] Yum!!
     
  12. KELIA

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    Trees can snap like twigs and fires can become unmanagable and if you have a big fire the fire itself can create a firestorm

    And now they know the real dangers.

    Very sweet update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=

     
  13. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Jade_Eyes Cute fun update. :) Berry pie-- berry anything [face_laugh] Yum!!

    Thanks all for reading and yes he will learn more and next update is also great fun.

    Entry 4

    Today was fun because we had a swimminglesson in the large pond and it was the last lesson of the day.

    A swimminglesson for an 11 year old?

    Yes it was an advanced lesson for the young healers and the teacher showed us how to treat a victim that was drowning.
    That was the serious part and I learned a lot.

    One of my schoolmates Sidnik who is a very good swimmer began to tickle the teacher and that got him and the teacher starting a waterfight.
    And of course the rest of the children and I joined them.

    Dad joined us and with him in the swimming pond things got quite hilarious. His swimmingtrunks started to....
    Oops, delete that.

    Anyway dad heard my laughter and told a story of his life as a Jedi in the temple and a meeting with Obi-Wan and Anakin in the swimming-pool.
    Never knew that Jedi had pink or garish decorated trunks but dad was very serious about that.

    I would have liked to see those Jedi playing with that purple crocodragon.

    Next dad told me a story of Siri, a lifelong friend of Obi-Wan and the prank Anakin, Garen and Obi-Wan played on her.
    A yellow polkadot bikini: geez that is cool. And when dad began to hum our teacher recognised the song and soon my class was singing along with him.

    She was afraid to come out of the locker
    She was as nervous as she could be
    She was afraid to come out of the locker
    She was afraid that somebody would see

    Two three four tell the people what she wore

    It was an Itsy Bitsy Teenie Weenie Yellow Polka Dot Bikini
    That she wore for the first time today
    An Itsy Bitsy Teenie Weenie Yellow Polka Dot Bikini
    So in the locker, she wanted to stay


     
  14. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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    Mega LOL!! Hugs!! :)
     
  15. KELIA

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    an Itsy Bitsy Teenie Weenie Yellow Polka Dot Bikini

    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    How wonderful to see some fun being had during the classes.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  16. AzureAngel2

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    Could be worse! Could have been a Bikini that Jabba has for one of his dancing girls...

    *grins a big deal!*
     
  17. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Jade_eyes Mega LOL!! Hugs!!



    AzureAngel2 Could be worse! Could have been a Bikini that Jabba has for one of his dancing girls...

    *grins a big deal!*

    Thanks all for reading and here is the next entry

    Entry 5

    Today I finished school early and it is a dull and grey day. Lenwe has no time to play or go to the firehouse.

    Dad has a small trunk and he has told me that I could explore its contents.
    He had taken with him when he escaped from the Jeditemple and it is a black painted durasteel thing with a small nameplate ?Kaagi Adin, Jedihealer.?

    Opening it I found a book, a real paper book and it was old.

    I read one little piece and that puzzled me ?we are beings of light?

    My dad gave me a book and that?s interesting WOW.

    I was still reading in it when he came back from his work and we talked about it.

    Never knew only two kinds of particles are responsible for all matter and energy.

    But beings of light is a saying of the Jedi and dad told me how he came to live in the Jeditemple.
     
  18. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Cool update. =D= I think Mr. Adin probably has lots of fascinating tales to tell. :)
     
  19. KELIA

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    Awww...that was very sweet

    There's no better way to spend a dull and grey day than with one's father

    [face_love] [face_love] [face_love]

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  20. AzureAngel2

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    Never knew only two kinds of particles are responsible for all matter and energy.

    Me neither until GL came up with it. But thanks for explaining the matter elsewhere on the boards so nicely. Actually that nicely that I learned to live with it.
     
  21. mavjade

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    Whew! I got so far behind! I'm sorry! DRL hates me!

    They have been wonderful, but the most recent is my favorite!

    Great job!
     
  22. earlybird-obi-wan

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    Jade_Eyes: Cool update. I think Mr. Adin probably has lots of fascinating tales to tell.

    Kelia: Awww...that was very sweet
    There's no better way to spend a dull and grey day than with one's father
    Great update

    Mavjade
    : Whew! I got so far behind! I'm sorry! DRL hates me!
    They have been wonderful, but the most recent is my favorite!
    Great job!



    Thanks all for reading and here is the next update

    Entry 6

    That diary is fun to read.

    I asked dad who master Yaddle was and he explained that she was of the same species as master Yoda. Green, little and three toed hands and feet and he showed me a picture of Yoda. He is funny to see but I see also a great wisdom behind those green eyes.

    More and more was revealed to me.
    A garden with a thousand fountains, training rooms, an obstacle course and all was situated in that great Jeditemple. They even had a firehouse.

    An entry about Yoda and his stew was funny and when I asked dad about it, he made the most horrible faces I have ever seen. He was still muttering about that stew when Luciano Robi came in.
    He is a great friend of mine and he is a famous firefighter. Luciano said that he loved that stew and that he would bring some the next time he planned to visit us.
    Dad gave a disgusting look and told me to go and read some more in the diary but without giving others bad ideas.

    Hmm, bad ideas! I am going to visit master Aaqu and see if he has some of those syringes. Dad could get away with wetting Yoda and Yaddle and I sure can with wetting him.

    I got them and I did wet my unsuspecting parents but I had to give up the syringe.
    ?You are too old for this Marhin Adin? dad said and mom agreed with him.

     
  23. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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    Wetting his parents!!

    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    That was priceless.

    You are too old for this Marhin Adin

    Oh come now, one is never too old to have a little fun :p

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  25. AzureAngel2

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    Is there a description how to do that very stew? Anybody?
     
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