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Saga Diary of Yoda's lightsabre, updated dec 28 completed Far future Picture added

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by earlybird-obi-wan, Jan 5, 2007.

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  1. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    This one is for the diary chalenge and will be posted after there has been a fight or other activities during the clonewars ending with ROTS and some time after that

    Title: Diary of Yoda?s lightsabre
    Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
    Timeframe: AOTC-ROTS- far future
    Characters: Yoda?s lightsabre
    Genre: action
    Keywords:
    Summary: it writes after it?s been activated
    Disclaimer: Star Wars = George Lucas.

    Entry 1 introducing

    Hey, here I am.
    Let me introduce myself.

    This morning I have been activated after a very long time.
    My master is sensing something
    I am more than 800 years old
    I am silver colored with black grips
    I have an elegant emitter shroud
    I am half as big as a standard lightsabre
    I have Adegan crystals for focussing the beam
    When activated my blade is bright green
    When activated I become five times as big as when resting
    Four parts of me are a beam when activated
    My master says we become luminous beings when dead
    I am a luminous being when I am alive.
    I am Yoda's lightsabre

    We are on a cloneship in hyperspace on its way to Geonosis.
    I have a bad feeling about this.

     
  2. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Entry 2 Geonosis

    Yesterday we got into a fight.
    My master was assaulted first with flying metal thingy?s
    Then the ceiling tried to came down on top of him.
    Lightning was absorbed by him
    A grey haired, two metre tall, dark clad human was attacking him
    Much to learn you still have, my master said
    The human said that this fight couldn?t be won through the force but by skills with a lightsabre and.
    Swoosh
    I was activated
    My master is a living whirlpool when fighting.
    He jumps and flies through the air, using every ledge and platform.
    Two Jedi, a master and a padawan are lying on the ground, one with two big wounds made by a colleague of me and the other missing half an arm.
    My master stays clear of them and attacks with great power.
    Shisssss, my green blade connects with a red blade.
    For some time it was a fight between red and green.
    My Green was unmovable
    Fought well, you have, my old padawan, my master said
    This is just the beginning the human said and he pulled one of the service cranes off balance to crush the two Jedi.
    I was de-activated.
     
  3. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    What an interesting idea for a diary! :D I love it. Please PM when you update.

    =D=
     
  4. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    WOW - I think this wins for most creative idea!!

    It's very interesting reading things from a lightsaber's POV.

    Loved it though.

    Looking forward to more

    =D==D==D==D=
     
  5. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Entry 3
    Trainingday
    Yesterday I was activated and saw ten little training-lightsabres hold by ten little initiates.
    My master was demonstrating how he flipped and jumped through the hangar on Geonosis.
    A Jedi with cinnamon colored hair walked in, limping slightly.
    It was the Jedi from Geonosis.
    ?Anakin is still with the senator on Naboo? he said.
    My master answered ?His rest he needs, has to get used to new arm.?
    So these two Jedi survived the falling service crane.
    ?No planet missing master Obi-Wan?? my master asked.
    Obi-Wan said ?No just came to watch the initiate-training class.?
    My master asked ?Help train initiates will you??
    Obi-Wan said ?I can help.?
    Obi-Wan and my master demonstrated some lightsabre-moves and my green blade clashed with his blue one.
    We were set on training-mode and the violent fireworks-display was absent.
    The blue one was good.
    The blue one was almost held stationary.
    Was that due to the limp of his master?
    No.
    He was showing defensive moves
    I was deactivated.
     
  6. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    How I would have loved to see Obi-Wan and Yoda demonstrating their moves to the younglings.

    I'm sure it was quite the sight.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  7. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Nice update! Yoda still has it. :p

    =D=
     
  8. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Yesterday I was to tired to update after running the 1/2 marathon of Egmond and so this day two entries

    Entry 4
    A pot of stew was sitting scraped clean on the table.
    My master was showing my activated blade to a group of six people:
    Firefighters

    He told them:
    A lightsabre weapon of a Jedi it is.
    Mostly used for defence.
    Deflects blasterbolts.
    An initiate uses a training-lightsabre
    An apprentice makes his first real lightsabre when young he is.
    An Adegan crystal and a color crystal he choses.
    Go to Ilum with his master he does
    Finished by the apprentice in a cave, the lightsabre is.

    Erntry 5
    My master was greeting the Jedi I had encountered on Geonosis and a few months back in the temple-trainingroom.
    Little initiates were watching us
    Green blade saluting the blue blade.
    Meeting the blue
    Jumping
    Soresu master meeting Ataru master

    Green meeting blue again
    Whirling and twirling through the air with my master
    Ataru master learning Soresu master new moves
    Soresu master stays in the light side of the Force
    Ataru master walks the thin line between light and dark
    Friendly hissing
    Never touching a body
    Little faces watching with awe
    As we battled
    And saluted each other
    After
    The battle.

     
  9. General_Kenobi_66

    General_Kenobi_66 Jedi Knight star 3

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    This is great=D=
    Such a neat idea for a diary=D=
    I'm looking forward to more:)
     
  10. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Another great update. =D=
     
  11. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Wonderful.

    I enjoyed Yoda's teaching techniques.

    Great update

    =D==D==D==D=
     
  12. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    This one is a bit of poetry.

    Entry 6
    Master Yoda has used me rescuing Luminara Unduli and Bariss Offee from the Ilum caves.

    I saw when I was activated

    White
    Snow

    Red bodies
    In a row

    Hovering droids
    Green meeting red bodies
    Hovering droids shattered in pieces
    Tens of them,
    Hundreds of them

    Silence
    A bluish light
    A sacred light
    A cave

    I know this cave
    More than 800 years ago
    I was born here.
    My green blade aglow.
     
  13. VaderLVR64

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    Very nicely done! =D=

    Silence
    A bluish light
    A sacred light
    A cave

    I know this cave
    More than 800 years ago
    I was born here.
    My green blade aglow.


    Loved it! :D
     
  14. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    WOW - that was very nice.

    I guess Yoda kicked some serious butt - as always :p.

    Loved the bit of poetry.

    =D==D==D==D=
     
  15. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Disclaimer for David Soul for using of his lyrics

    Entry 7

    Master Yoda used me as a focussing device for meditating.

    I was activated and held in a vertical position
    I saw two masters sitting next to my master

    Master Enga
    Master Kaagi

    Through a window I could see two Jedi

    Master Obi-Wan
    Master Aaqu

    Master Kaagi started to recite a poem

    Don't give up on us, Jedi
    Don't let dark destroy the light
    The future isn't just one night
    It's written in the moonlight
    And painted on the stars
    We can't change ours

    Don't give up on us, Jedi
    We're still worth one more try
    I know we put a last one by
    Just for a rainy evening
    When maybe stars are few
    Don't give up on us, I know
    We can still come through

    My blade guided the light
    Setting everything in a luminous green glow.
     
  16. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Nice update! =D=
     
  17. General_Kenobi_66

    General_Kenobi_66 Jedi Knight star 3

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    Whoops... missed a couple[face_blush] Sorry about that[face_blush]

    Anyway, great couple of posts. Loved the bit of Poetry=D=
     
  18. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    It's activated again

    Entry 8
    I remember the last nights and about the second night I can tell you this

    This is the second night we sit here.
    My master tells Obi-Wan of his initiate-years

    Hold on Obi-Wan
    Force is elusive
    Force will come back to you

    My master tells Obi-Wan of his padawan-years.
    Of his first day as a padawan of Qui-Gon Jinn.
    Of his visit to the cave of Ilum were his first real lightsaber was born.
    A blue blade it has, like his eyes.

    Luminous beings we are
    You and me
    My master tells him of that fateful day on Naboo and I see one tear trickling down his cheek

    Hold on Obi-Wan
    For a few more days
    Anakin looking for a cure he is.

    Yes, this Obi-Wan must survive as he is the hope for the future.


    Days later I was again activated:

    Obi-Wan is awake

    He is recovering

    My master and Obi-Wan are sitting on a bed meditating.

    I am held as a focussing device.

    I see a pale thin man.

    His eyes are shining

    Bright cerulean blue.

    His hair is dull and wet from sweat

    Ginger colored.

    He must have gone through a great ordeal.

    He had lost the Force

    Now he is shining again

    With the Force

     
  19. VaderLVR64

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    He had lost the Force

    Now he is shining again

    With the Force


    Wonderful! =D=
     
  20. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    That was lovely.

    It's too bad Obi-Wan was so sick but I loved Yoda and Anakin being there for him.

    Nice updates

    =D==D==D==D=
     
  21. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Kelia, General-Kenobi-66, VaderLvr thanks for the replies [face_dancing]

    Obi-Wan is recovered and here is the next entry

    Entry 9

    Snap Hiss I was activated

    Saluting my blue colleague

    Obi-Wan was holding him

    Yoda was holding me

    We were fighting again blue against green

    I flew through the air with my master

    We landed on a pillar

    My opponent came next

    ?How did you manage to get ALL the way up there?? Obi-Wan asked.

    Yoda said ?Using the force like you did. Size matters not.?

    Down we went and clashed again.

    Both decided to end it

    We saluted each other.

    Obi-Wan was fully recovered

    All his friends were watching

    The initiates

    The Jedi

    The civilians

    He thanked everybody

    It was a great celebration

     
  22. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I'm gald to see Obi-Wan up and around.

    His sparring match with Yoda was a great way to celebrate his recovery.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  23. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Entry 10

    Snap hiss I was activated

    I saw a wreck
    I saw six men
    Firefighters

    They were practising
    With a big cutting tool

    My master asked if he could participate
    The Chief agreed

    My blade cut through the wreck

    A door
    Another door
    The roof
    The pieces went flying
    A large heap of wreckage was forming

    The victims were sitting
    No movement detectable
    They were
    Untouched
    By my blade

    Five pair of eyes watching this
    This is ?Cool?

    One familiar person
    Had seen me fight before
    But has never seen me used like this

    Six beings yelling with approval
    Eager to have me as a tool of rescue

     
  24. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Wonderful imagery.

    I'm glad to see Yoda's lightsaber being used for more than fighting and sparring

    Great update

    =D==D==D==D=

     
  25. VaderLVR64

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    Another great entry to the challenge. Very unique and well done.

    Five pair of eyes watching this
    This is ?Cool?

    One familiar person
    Had seen me fight before
    But has never seen me used like this

    Six beings yelling with approval
    Eager to have me as a tool of rescue


    =D=
     
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