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Beyond - Legends Elves, and Hobbits, and Jedi?!? Lotr/StarWars crossover LINK TO SEQUEL UP!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Sprikloas, Nov 18, 2004.

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  1. ZebulaNebula

    ZebulaNebula Jedi Master star 5

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    Cool. I'll cover you until then. Up.
     
  2. Emperor_Kilo

    Emperor_Kilo Jedi Master star 4

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    Yay!

    ~Kilo
     
  3. Emperor_Kilo

    Emperor_Kilo Jedi Master star 4

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    Um....when's the next Chapter?
     
  4. Sprikloas

    Sprikloas Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Now. Sorry, Couldn't get on on the weekend, my mother was being angry.

    Chapter nineteen: Lothlorien (the beginning)

    Gimli went on muttering about the mad witch of the forest, while no one listened. Chewbacca and Lowie were beyond happy to finally see large trees, and with joyful howls, they set about climbing the mighty mallorns. Aragorn watched them with a confused look, and gave Han a cocked eyebrow in question.

    "Oh, on their home planet, Kashyyyk, the trees are so large that the planet cities are built on them. Chewie and Lowie haven't seen tall trees such as these for ages." Han grinned up at his friend and Lowbacca as they clambered amongst the mallorn leaves. Aragorn nodded, peering around to make sure he still had everyone.

    Frodo was still confused at the voice he had heard in his head; maybe he was just going mad? Nearby, Jacen looked upset, peering into the sky and the trees as if looking for something. Suddenly, a black shape hurdled from the treetops and came to rest on Jacen's shoulder.
    "Talon! I knew you'd find us!" The crebain twittered happily, rubbing his beak on the Jedi's cheek. Tenel Ka grinned behind Jacen's back and patted the bird as well.

    Gimli started talking louder, casting his gaze about the forest floor and brandishing his axes.
    "Well, here's one dwarf she won't ensnare so easily! I have the eyes of a hawk, and the ears of a fox!" Anakin gave the dwarf an amused look, then suddenly looked panicked.
    "Aragorn there's a-" His words were cut off by an arrow to the throat. A good twenty elves stepped from the trees, all pointing longbows and steeltipped elven arrows directly at the group. Tenel Ka growled and went for her saber, as did the other Jedi. The wookiees dropped form the trees with a howl, but Aragorn waved them all back as he came forward to talk to the elves.

    The leading elf, a disgruntled looking blonde, sneered. "The dwarf breathes so loud, we could have shot him in the dark. And your hairy companions have climbed the sacred mallorns. What other problems do you bring to our forest?" Aragorn bowed to the elves.

    " Haldir o Lórien. Henion aníron, boe ammen i dulu lîn. Boe ammen veriad lîn." Only Legolas and Frodo did not look confused at this. Haldir looked huffy, then beckoned to everyone, and turned.

    "You have entered the realm of the Lady of the Wood. You cannot go back. Come, she is waiting!" The fellowship followed behind, Aragorn leading. Talon stayed perched on Jacen's shoulder as they were led onwards into unknown forest.

    (Ok, the next chappie will be more in Lothlorien. Sorry it's so short today; I have classes and can't write more.)

    ((Ps: the elvish translates to this :"Haldir of Lórien, we come here for help. We need your protection"
     
  5. TheProphetOfSullust

    TheProphetOfSullust Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Hmm... wonder what Galadriel will make of the Force?

    And what kind of gifts will she give to the SW characters?

    Keep it up, Sprikloas!
     
  6. ZebulaNebula

    ZebulaNebula Jedi Master star 5

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    Way cool. Everyone's reactions to the arrows in their faces were priceless. I guess the short post means more chappies until that unpleasantness at Amon Hen.
     
  7. Shadowknight1

    Shadowknight1 Jedi Master star 6

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    Yay, Lothlorien! :D

    Loved how the Elves didn't like the Wooks climbing the trees. :p
     
  8. liv3

    liv3 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    just found this, loved it, sent the link to two of my friends (though i didn't appreciate drunk Gandalf... lol)

    though i've seen this quote used in this context before (and thus rendering my usage of it unoriginal) i say it now: "we'll be watching your career with great interest"
     
  9. Sprikloas

    Sprikloas Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Lol@ your siggy... And didn't appreciate drunk Gandy? Meh.. he'll be back crazier than before, and he'll really seem drunker. :D As to all, expect next chapter this weekend.
     
  10. liv3

    liv3 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    hmm.... you have a point.... my sig doesn't realy match that comment... lol,
    still, i can't picture a drunk gandalf.... maybe he can have a different idiosincracy when he comes back... like skitsophrenia or something.... lol
     
  11. Sprikloas

    Sprikloas Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Hm... We'll have Gollum with the crazyness, Gandalf will be serious, methinks. He'll also be much more knowledgable about the Jedi.
     
  12. ZebulaNebula

    ZebulaNebula Jedi Master star 5

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    Cool. Gollum seems like an interesting character for that. P.S. Does anyone else see a similarity between Gollum and Vergere, or is that me?
     
  13. Mystralgurl

    Mystralgurl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    ok, I'm gonna read this story, catch up on it and then I will let everybody know what I think... :D
     
  14. Emperor_Kilo

    Emperor_Kilo Jedi Master star 4

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    I think its just you
     
  15. liv3

    liv3 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    yeah... just you....
     
  16. liv3

    liv3 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    can we get an update? please??
    pretty please???
    .......
    .......
    .......

    ok, fine, i'm on my knees begging... u happy now?

    (sigh)....
     
  17. Sprikloas

    Sprikloas Jedi Youngling star 1

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    CHAPTER TWENTY: Galadriel and such


    Haldir led the group through the forests, towards the central city of Caras Galadhon. Haldir spoke much in elvish to both Aragorn and Legolas, which peeved Gimli off to no end. Thankfully, Frodo spoke a little Sindarin himself, so he filled in the Jedi and the dwarf on what was happening.

    "They're taking us to see Galadriel, the Elven queen. She waits for us with her husband, Celeborn, in the city of Caras Galadhon. There we will find if she will help us in our quest or not." Jacen passed this information on to his parents, as Aragorn was spending too much time talking to Haldir to explain things to the others. As the line of travelers neared the elven capital, they began to see great houses in the treetops. Chewie moaned in longing, and spoke to Lowbacca in low growling tones. Haldir, seeing that everyone was interested in the tree-houses, came back to explain.

    "Those are the talan of the Lothlorien elves. The great mallorn trees alone can hold the weight of these vast houses, and most of the cities in this forest are built up there. Caras Galadhon itself is a many-tiered fortress in trees." Haldir sighed at the thought of again being amongst his fellow elves, instead of in the company of teenagers and the non-bathing Aragorn. Not to mention the Dwarf, and the odd Gondorian who waved a metallic thing about madly.

    That night, they were taken up into one of the sentry talan on the border of Caras Galadhon. The Jedi managed the slim ladder into the treehouse with ease, using the force to balance. Tenel Ka, who Jacen thought might have problems with ladder climbing with only one arm, made it up faster than he did. The hobbits, however, had to be helped up. In the end, Anakin and Tahiri lifted each hobbit up into the house with the force, as the elves could not find a way to lift them. Gimli was another problem. He refused to climb up, saying that dwarves did not sleep in trees like the girly elves, and that he would curl on the ground to sleep. Legolas tried to cajole him, and Boromir threatened him with bodily harm, but in the end, Zekk told everyone to leave him, and when the dwarf slept, he was lifted into the tree. Zekk and Jaina, both grinning, did the honors.

    That night, Aragorn and Haldir talked late, mostly of what the queen's idea would be of him arriving without Gandalf, and with many more people than was expected, with some of these people having odd talents, weapons or body hair. Aragorn even agreed to bathe himself in a river before arriving to meet Galadriel, if it would help dampen her feelings towards his companions.

    In the morning, they ate light elven food and continued on without much incidence, except when Gimli awoke and rolled off the side of the talan; since he was unaware he was in the tree. The unfortunate-ness of a pile of mashed dwarf on the ground was only stopped by the quick force-catch of Tenel Ka and Tahiri. Still, the forest rang with dwarven curses all morning. Aragorn's bath in a passing river was uneventful, save for the river turning a strange black-ish color around the Ranger.

    The group arrived in the late afternoon to Caras Galadhon. Jacen told Talon to fly up and scout out the area. Not that it was needed, but because Haldir had expressed concern over one of the Crebain being in Lorien, and Jacen didn't want trouble with the queen. Elven escorts came for the fellowship at the base of one large mallorn, and Haldir took his leave. The path up the tree wasn't a ladder, as before, but a finely carved and sculpted staircase that twirled around the trunk. Leia expressed great awe for the carve-work, and was speechless as they ascended higher and the neighboring talan could be seen. Each talan was made as though from dreams: swirling woodwork, metal leaves that adorned the houses, most of which made the dwellings look as if they had been grown onto the tree, instead of being built.

    Finally, the fellowship mounted a crest in the staircase, and stood on a wide platform. Before them was a great throne, and seated upon that throne, Gal
     
  18. ZebulaNebula

    ZebulaNebula Jedi Master star 5

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    Nice. Man, Aragorn needed a bath. What was that black stuff? Coal dust? Grit from Moria? Grime? And Gimli almost rolling out of the tree was priceless.
     
  19. TheProphetOfSullust

    TheProphetOfSullust Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    [face_laugh][face_laugh][face_laugh][face_laugh][face_laugh]

    Eighteen are here, yet nine there were, set out from Rivendell.

    Priceless!

    Who will look into the mirror? Jacen? Leia? What're they going to see?

    And when will we actually get the Ring involved?
     
  20. Sprikloas

    Sprikloas Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Huh. a nice long chapter... and only two people to see it? *cries*
     
  21. liv3

    liv3 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    aw, c'mon... don't cry, i saw it, i just wasn't able to post....
     
  22. -Darksaber-

    -Darksaber- Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I'm reading! I'm reading! Keep going, for Force sake. This is priceless.
     
  23. -Darksaber-

    -Darksaber- Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I'm a lurker. He he.

    "Eighteen there are here, yet nine there were, set out from Rivendell."
    *sniggers and twirls lightsaber*
     
  24. skywalker64089

    skywalker64089 Jedi Knight star 3

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    *delurks*

    Seems to be getting a little more serious.

    *relurks*
     
  25. DarthNotsonice

    DarthNotsonice Jedi Master star 5

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    Curiouser,and curiouser [face_thinking]
     
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