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Saga Hot Chocolate on Hoth (Han/Leia, romance, 2 part, during ESB) - Update 10/4! Han's POV

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Jaya Solo, Sep 28, 2006.

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  1. Luna_Nightshade

    Luna_Nightshade Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Hehehehe--I love the idea of Han getting "cold sickness" before even going out there. Sweets, and alcohol, and foot rubs... mmmm.... Han does have needs too, doesn't he? ;)

    T'was adorable, Jaya. You know how much I enjoyed this. Thank you very, very much. [:D]
     
  2. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    It was so nice seeing Han's POV on this situation! :p

    But I couldn?t leave with her thinking she needed Luke more than me. So I leaned in and kissed her softly, with just a hint of passion so that she?d be wanting. The slightly pouty look she gave me sealed the deal. She totally wanted me.

    ?Wait. You can?t do anything with out my orders,? she said, her eyes pleading with me to stay and yet screaming for Luke to be found.

    ?So order it.? Not that I needed her order. I?d do it anyway. The Ice Princess does have a heart after all, and it was breaking at the idea of losing both of us.

    ?Han, I request that you locate Commander Skywalker and bring him back to the base.?

    ?Anything for you, Princess.?

    I better get a big reward for this. One that involved her and a bikini and kisses. Lots of kisses. And alcohol. Maybe her rubbing my feet too. And feeding me sweets. Great, I?m already suffering from cold sickness and I haven?t even set one foot outside.

    She better be worth it.


    Beautiful! [face_laugh] =D=
     
  3. dm1

    dm1 Jedi Master star 4

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    That was really great, especially doing it from both POV's! Oh, Han just knows she wants him... well, isn't he in for a surprise, caught in his own trap, he wants her, too, but he also cares.

    I couldn't really see Leia ordering Han to go out there to find Luke, even if he told her to, and she knew he'd do it anyway. I think her initial thought about it being sending Han out there to die would really get to her. Since when did Han follow orders? I thought he just sort of ran out there on impulse, and Leia would be furious that he did ("He did WHAT?!?"), as she now has him to worry about, too. Still, the way you did this was most interesting, and I loved the 'goodbye' kiss at the end. It made that slight inconsistency worthwhile.
     
  4. Jaya Solo

    Jaya Solo Jedi Knight star 5

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    I went by the Wookiepedia article about Hoth. :p It said that Leia ordered him to go. :p That's what I'm going by. :p
     
  5. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    This is so cute!!! I love how you showed both their POVs :) They totally like each other :D

    Are you going to continue this? Pretty pretty please? [face_batting]
     
  6. Tahi

    Tahi Jedi Knight star 5

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    Oh I loved this, Jaya. What a great idea to do the two points of view. The dialogue is perfect. :)

    ?Well, I?d prefer to see you in a bikini, but he?s a much better talker.? Unfortunately I was dealing with the king of retorts.

    ?Han Solo, there is no way you?d ever see me in a bikini of any sort,? I said, ignoring the side of me that desperately wanted him to.

    ?Many women have said that before you.? His cocky attitude was rewarded by my cup of still warm liquid hovering dangerously close to his crotch. ?Hey! Let?s not do anything hasty.?

    ?Yes, that would be a waste of a good cup,? I replied before taking another sip.

    That bit was especially good - if only they both knew . . . :D

    I liked the way, amidst the humour, you showed Han's soft side. :)


     
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