I Dreamed I Fought Darth Vader

I was sitting with Luke on a log, preparing to eat our dinner, ration bars. "I really hate these things!" I exclaimed "Why do they have to taste so," I made a face "tastless!"

"I really don't know." Luke replied, "But at least they don't taste bad! Isn't tasteless better than bad?" He asked.

"I suppose, but why couldn't they taste good?" I stared sadly at my ration bar. Just then Luke got a funny look on his face and said, "I feel like.." There was a sudden noise behind us and luke drew his blaster, turned around, and said, "Like we're bing watched!"

The strange creature that made the sound covered his face and commented, "Away put your weapons! I mean you no harm, I am woudering, why are you here?"

"We're looking for someone." Luke answered coutiously. "Looking? Found someoone you have I would say Hmmm?" the creature retorted pleasently. "Right." Luke said doutfully.

Got to go, more soon.

 

I like reading this ^_^
Great work!

I wish I dreamed Star Wars more than 3 times in my entire life though =)

 

"Help you I can. Find your friend, hmmmm?" The creature stated. "Luke made a face, "I Don't think so. And I'm not looking for a friend, I'm looking for a great warrior." "O, warrior. Wars not make one great, no." the creature replied with conviction. I sat quietly, wondering who, or what, this being was. He seemed to know a lot, and I would not be surprised if he could help us.

The being approched our equipment cases, and began to take things out, and toss them over his shoulder. This new development did nothing to improve Luke's veiw of the creature. "Hey, stop that!" Luke exclaimed. just then the creature found our electric lamp. He seemed to like it very much and did not want to give it up. "Hey, give me that!" Luke exclamied. "I'll need it to get out of this slimy mudhole!" Luke excklaiomed and reached for it, but the being yanked it out of reach. "Slimy? Mudhole? My home this is!"
"Okay, you can have it. I'm sure Luke didn't mean that." I interrupted. "Now, maybe you can help us. Do you know of a Jedi Master that lives here?" I ignorred the nasty look Luke shot me and waited for an answer. "Jedi master, Yoda, you seek Yoda. Take you to him I will!" He headed of into the fog.

"Loren! What are you doing?"Luke asked angrily "Finding Yoda" I replied. "Hey, this can't be anymore of a wast of time than just sitting here. Maybe he has some decent food too!" I started off after the creature. Luke followed reluctantly, shaking his head, and muttering something about not wanting to leave the camp unattended.

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I was sitting in the creature's small hut on Dagobah, peering at the unappetizing gruel he had given us for dinner. This is worse than ration bars! I thought to my self. Luke was getting impatiant to find out where Yoda was, and said, "I don't understand why we can't see Yoda now!"

"Patcience! Yoda not far, soon, soon you will be with him!" The creature replied, coming into the room. "Why should you become Jedi?" He asked.

"Well mostly because of my father I guess" Luke answered.
"Hummmmm, father, powerful jedi was he." The being commented gravely.
"How could you know my father?" Luke exclaimed angrily. "You don't even know who I am! I don't even know what I'm doing here! Loren, We'er wasting our time with this creature!"

The being's ears drooped, and his face assumed a sad expression. "I can not teach him." His voice sounded as if the weight of too many disapointments, and decisions was on his shoulders. "Much anger in him, like his father."

"Yoda!" Luke breathed in shock.
"Master Yoda." I said. "Give Luke a chance, he is just..... impatcient. I know a Jedi should not be, but he is young. He has more power than me."

"My own counsel will I keep, on who is powerfull! Strong in the Force Luke is, but reckless is he. Unwilling to wait is he. You, kind you are, patcient. Train you I will, if prove himself Luke does, then train him also I will." Yoda stated firmly.

Luke crawlled out of the hut and marched away. "Master Yoda." I began, "Luke IS strong, and I am afraid of what may happen if his ability's are left untempered. If he is angered, and rejected. I know you will decide what to do, but please, consider what I have said. I am honered that you desiere to train me, and I hope I will not disapoint you." This said I sat quietly, and pondered our situation.

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Looks to me like your a Jedi Writer. (Did that keep you bunnies from starving. I wouldn't want that to happen. Then how would you write more?)

 

That deffinatly helped my bunnies! Thanks for the compliment! I'll write more tomorrow if I can!

 

If anyone is reading, I'm really sorry it's been so long, but I seem to have developed a bad case of writer's block! Maybe if you feed my bunnies some more they'll give me some ideas!

 

Just so you know, as far as I can tell, getting a new topic going is hard. I'm trying to get mine going. I just wish writer's block had a simple cure. (I haven't gotten any plot bunnies yet.)

 

If anyone wants me to write more, say so. I think I have an idea for a post.

 

Hey, I want you to write more.
Please. This is getting very interesting.

 

Okay, Unless one of my family keeps me of the computer after dinner I'll post later tonight.

 

I found Luke sitting on a log near our camp. He was in a very bad mood. "Loren!" He exclaimed "I knew better than to leave our camp unattended! Something got into our food and ate it all!" He scowled at me with a 'I told you so' look on his face.

"Luke, I'm sorry about the food, but we do have Yoda's provisions to see us through. Our rations wouldn't have lasted that long any way." I tried to reason with him, but he was having none of it.

"Loren, how do we know that this creature really is Yoda? We don't know for sure, and he doesn't act much like a Jedi Master either."

"I know he is. And you do to, but you'r to hurt, and angry to admitt it. I feel it, he is Yoda. Please don't give in to anger." I pleaded "Remember what Ben told us about that?"

"Yah, but right now I don't really care." Luke jumpped up, and marched away.

"Told you I did, trained he should not be." Yoda appered from nowhere and addressed me.

"Yes Master, but I don't think I can do what needs to be done on my own. I need Luke's help."

"Of no help will he be, if turned he is." Yoda stated sadly.

 

Is anyone reading? I seem to be the only writer on the board that can't get feedback! Please reply!

 

I have trouble getting readers. I haven't written any stories on my own yet.

 

Sorry you have trouble too! But that does make me feel a little bit better! I'll post later today if my bunnies don't go on strike from hunger!

 

Nice! Sorry I've been gone for so long! Looks like luke's got his own problems. Hope Loren can knock some sense into him before long.

And please keep writing! =)

 

I'm trying to get the next post to form! My bunnies must still be hungry! I'll try REALLY hard to post tonite if I get proof that people are reading!

 

I am reading, JKTRAINING, even if I don't post! Sometimes the school computers don't log me in so I can't post. Other times I simply forget to put a reply!

But it's really getting on well!

 

I'll post a little later.

 

Okay here it is.

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In his private sactum on Corusant the Emperor sat and brooded. He was not at all happy with Vader. In the Emperor's book failure was at the top of the list of unforgivable transsgresions. That his most trusted servent could commit such a crime was unthinkable. But, somehow, he had! Palpitine was not even remotly sure what to do with Vader. Normaly execution would be the punisment for failure, but he did not want to execute Vader. Demotion might be aducuate, but then who would take his place? No, he would have to come up with somthing else. Vader would not get away unscathed though, no, Palpitine was far too angry for that.

 

Just upping so people can read.

 

Guess nobody's reading this