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I Dreamed I Fought Darth Vader

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by JKTRAINING, Jan 25, 2001.

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  1. JKTRAINING

    JKTRAINING Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Thanks all for the quick replies! I really appreciate it! QG, Yoda is NOT an evil little muppet! You better apologize real quick! Or he, and me, may get VERY unhappy!
     
  2. JKTRAINING

    JKTRAINING Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    And, UPPPPP! Stay up there!
     
  3. Rokangus

    Rokangus Jedi Knight star 5

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    Nicely done. Hopefully Luke gets out of his funk, or Artoo might have to smack him upside the head with one of those robo-arms.

    I'm also curious to see what happened to Loren in the cave.
     
  4. JKTRAINING

    JKTRAINING Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Umm Rok, R2 isn't in this story! It was a good idea though!
     
  5. JKTRAINING

    JKTRAINING Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Okay, here comes the highly requested cave post. I think it's a little ify.

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    I walked cautiously into the cave that Yoda had pointed out. Apparently this was a test of some kind. Yoda had not exactly said that, but he had hinted at it. Going into a place as strong with the dark side as this also only made sense if it ws a test. I looked arround a bit apperhensivly, and tried to calm the mynoks in my stomach. As I walked farther in to the cave I began to wonder what I would find there. suddenly my question was answered! Darth Vader appered oout of nowhere! I jumped back in shock, and started to reach for my lightsaber. Then I stopped, no, I WOULD NOT fight. This was a second chance to do things right. I would not fail. I stood, firm in my resolve, and faced the dark specter. Suddenly the unbelivable began to happen. The mask the figure wore faded away, to revel, Luke! I gasped, "No, this can't be, you are not Vader!"

    "But I am, my friend." The way Luke/Vader said friend made it sound like an insult. "I am him, and you will be turned, and join us!"

    "Never!" I yelled drawing my lightsaber. Strangely the battle was easy and I had soon decapitated my opponent. A sudden relization came to me, I had failed the test. I turned and slowly walked out of the cave.

    When I was out I saw Yoda sitting on a log, waiting for me. I approched him, fell to my knees, bowed my head, and breathed, "I'm sorry master, I failed."

    Yoda looked at me sadly, "Yes, you did, but learn to overcome your anger, and impulivnes, you can. Come, time to eat it is."

    I rose sadly, and followed Yoda to his hut.

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    Hope it wasn't to ify! Replies are always wanted!
     
  6. Aralna

    Aralna Jedi Master star 4

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    Good. She failed the test and she knows it. That's a start. She didn't fail as badly as Lukie in the movies though. Once again: good.

    will Lukie ever overcome his recklessness?
     
  7. JKTRAINING

    JKTRAINING Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Wow, Aralna, your fast! Thanks a lot! As to you questions, you'll have to wait and see!
     
  8. Aralna

    Aralna Jedi Master star 4

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    I have no patience, I recently turned to the DarkSide when I tortured Vader.
     
  9. JKTRAINING

    JKTRAINING Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Ahhh! You can't turn! If you do I'll have to stop writing!
     
  10. Aralna

    Aralna Jedi Master star 4

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    If I can't turn I'll have to stay on the Dark Side, so I think you want me to turn.
     
  11. JKTRAINING

    JKTRAINING Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Uhh, ya. Guess your right! So turn back to the light real quick, so I can write some more!
     
  12. JKTRAINING

    JKTRAINING Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Okay, I'm gonna give you all the benefit of the doubt, and assume that you'er all at school, or collage. But, when you get back, you MUST reply if you want more! See you, (or at least you'r replies) then! ^_^
     
  13. Aralna

    Aralna Jedi Master star 4

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    Okay, I'll turn back. "Hey Ani, I have a new outfit for you. I won't dump bleach on this one. Sorry about your last outfit, I had to see if the stormies could do anything except follow orders."

    Hi, I'm back, no longer evil. It was fun while it lasted though.

    I'm not at school. We have winter break. I love winter break: no school this week!
     
  14. JKTRAINING

    JKTRAINING Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Cool! I'm happy for you, but I homeschool, so I still have school. At least when I take breaks I can go get on the board and check to see if you have replied! I'm glad your back on the light! Why ever would you want to be on the dark? And how is being dark fun? Just curious. If you reply enough I might put up another post just for you!
     
  15. Aralna

    Aralna Jedi Master star 4

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    I got to torture Vader. Are you saying *that* isn't fun?
     
  16. JKTRAINING

    JKTRAINING Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    No, it isn't! Tortureing ANYONE isn't fun! I only did it in my thread cause I had to!
     
  17. Aralna

    Aralna Jedi Master star 4

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    Oh, well, I didn't kill Vader. He's still alive.

    Anyway, the rest of the time was very boring. At least as a Jedi, I get some respect.
     
  18. JKTRAINING

    JKTRAINING Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Yupp, you do. I saw your appology to vader on that other thread. He and I thank you. Now do you want me to write more? I'll be back to see as soon as I do my Algebra homework ^_^
     
  19. Aralna

    Aralna Jedi Master star 4

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    Yes, I want you to write more. Why would I say no? That just wouldn't make sense.
     
  20. Rokangus

    Rokangus Jedi Knight star 5

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    Luke: Aaaah! Vader was in the cave! I fought him and cut off his head! But then it turned out to be my head. What a goof, I cut off my own head! What the heck am I supposed to do with no head?

    Yoda: Symbolism. Lost on you it is.

    Liked the cave scene. Yes, please keep posting! Gotta read more.
     
  21. JKTRAINING

    JKTRAINING Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Well, well. I don't really know Arlana! Maybe if a post was really bad? And Rok, that was so cute! Here comes more,

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    Luke was not in a very good mood. Yoda had rejected him, Loren was being trained insted of him, and on top of all that SHE had gotten tested, while he was thourally ignored! Well he'd just see about that! He was going into the cave, invited or not. He got up and march in. Once inside he looked around resolutly, he would just show that troll! Suddenly he jumped as a figure came toward he out of the mist. It looked like, could it be? Yes, it was! It was Loren!

    "Luke, what are you doing here? You were not invited!" The specter stated.

    "No, I wasn't, and I don't care! Now, out of my way!" Luke exclaimed angrily.

    "No Luke, I can't let you come in any farther. You must go back now."

    "I will NOT leave." Luke replied tersly, and drew his lightsaber. He slashed at Loren, and cut her down. As she fell she dissappered. Realization dawned on Luke, that was never Loren, it was just a vision. He turned and stalked away in anger. He was going to get off of this crazy planet, no matter the cost.



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    Well, there you have it, I hope you like it. Do reply as always. Thanks.
     
  22. Aralna

    Aralna Jedi Master star 4

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    Luke's going to follow in my footsteps it looks like. Except I'm not as sure he'll come back.
     
  23. JKTRAINING

    JKTRAINING Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Arlana, where are you? Was that one so bad you won't even reply?
     
  24. JKTRAINING

    JKTRAINING Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    O, there you are. Do you want him to come back?
     
  25. Aralna

    Aralna Jedi Master star 4

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    I don't know. I've always thought Luke was whiny and stupid.

    You could have Lukie attack Yoda, and Yoda holds him in the air so he's just flailing around doing nothing.
    (I wonder where I got that from...oh, yes. VotF)
     
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