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Saga New parts, for the rewrite challenge

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by earlybird-obi-wan, Oct 31, 2012.

  1. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

    Aug 21, 2006
    New parts
    Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
    Timeframe: after ROTS
    Characters: Darth Vader and Darth Sidious
    Genre: rewrite
    Summary: for the Halloween challenge.

    Disclaimer: Star Wars is owned by G.L.

    Darth Vader had entered his meditation sphere.

    The medical droid had attached the tubes, another had lifted mask and helmet and the dark lord had closed his eyes.


    Darth Vader opened his eyes and recognised the environment. “What are you doing?”

    A droid appendage with a deathly pale leg appeared in his vision.

    “New limbs apprentice.”

    “Where did you find those?”

    “The Jedi you killed was still useful. I found her in her precious library, could preserve the parts I needed and hurried you to my centre.”

    “I am a man.”

    “You are mine.”


    ‘Sawing sounds?’ Soon it was clear “Owwww!!!”

    “Pain is your strength Vader.”

    “AAAAHHHH.” Vader passed out only to wake moments later, or were those moments?

    “Lord Vader rise!”

    Darth Vader opened his eyes. The pain was gone. He looked down. His quite useful prosthetic limbs were replaced by old legs. He moved his hands. They were old and frail, veins visible under the thin skin and small.
    He stood up, gingerly and unsteady and saw. Even his face was replaced. Even the life-support. A golden torso was now his. A face was framed with dark curly long hair. “Aoooh” And he stopped a moment, disgusted of the high female voice and began to shriek “AAAWWWW NOOOOH”

    Wobbly legs didn’t support him and he was falling down.

  2. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

    Nov 9, 2010
    [face_laugh] It's Vader/Frankenstein. Poor Vader.
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  3. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

    Jun 14, 2005
    Wobbly legs didn’t support him and he was falling down.


    Great idea to link him with Frankenstein. I myself had no time for the challenge. Had to observe exams and now I have guests for the entire weekend. I hardly have time for NaNo!
  4. Jedi_Lover

    Jedi_Lover Chosen One star 5

    Nov 1, 2004
    Hey, a lot of guys would love that type of hair. It would help cover up that big ugly gash on the top of his head.;) Nicely done!