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Saga This Time Around [AU, time travel; Jaina, Kyp, A/P, Obi-Wan] A/N July 18

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Idrelle_Miocovani, Jul 6, 2007.

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  1. JediXManSerenaKenobi

    JediXManSerenaKenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    WOO HOO!!! THEY MADE IT!!! Awesome, awesome chapter, Idri!! [:D]:)

    - Serena
     
  2. RK_Striker_JK_5

    RK_Striker_JK_5 Force Ghost star 7

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    Good luck on the exams and sorting out DRL. I'll be here when you return. [:D]

    And... damn! Awesome action, there. Jaina is terminal? not good... Well, I hope you pull a rabbit out of your hat here for her. Can't wait for more, Idrelle. :)
     
  3. ratna

    ratna Jedi Knight star 4

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    Great story. Take care of yourself.
     
  4. The_Slilent_One

    The_Slilent_One Jedi Master star 3

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    woohoo!! or should i say "yeepee!!!" :p

    They are free.. but are they clear?? [face_thinking]

    Great work :D
     
  5. Jedi_QueenBee

    Jedi_QueenBee Jedi Youngling star 3

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    so , is palpy dead?
     
  6. Darth-Semians

    Darth-Semians Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Wonderful chapter, Idrelle_Miocovani. =D=

    Its okay if you take some time to get the next installment out. Take care of yourself and your family - those are important; Star Wars can wait.

    Unlike what I usually do and speculate about what might be happenning, I won't because turely I don't care what you decide to do. You are a great writer and should really consider doing it for real. If you have any non-Star Wars ideas floating in your mind, jot them down on a notepad and go from there. Who knows, with your abilities, you could end up with a New York Times Bestseller. Just sayin'.

    Take care and hopefully you get yourself situated out right and will be glad to recieve the next chapter... whenever that may be.

    Darth-Semians

    [face_peace]
     
  7. Diamond_Revelation

    Diamond_Revelation Jedi Master star 3

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    Great couple of chapters Idrelle! I am glad they got Jaina out but I really can't see how they are going to stop her dying!!

    Looking forward to the next!
     
  8. Idrelle_Miocovani

    Idrelle_Miocovani Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Nat
    I am kind of relieved that this chapter has come and gone. It closes this particular arc and now I get to start on the next one. 8-} Finally Jaina is reunited with the others, which is something I am very glad of for a writer?s reason of missing writing her character alongside the others. I miss the K/J dynamic from previous chapters and I?m glad that I?ll be able to go back to that now that Jaina?s rescued. And I?m sure you readers will be glad to be able to read it just as I am glad to write it again. ;)

    Unfortunately, even though this arc is now closed, there are things developed through it that carry on into the next one? namely what happened to Jaina during her imprisonment.

    We?re not out of the woods yet.

    FitJedi
    A victory of sorts, I suppose one could say. But how much of a victory? You?ll have to wait and find out. ;)


    blurt
    Well, Jaina?s condition is going to explored in future chapters. For now we?ll just have to be satisfied with them getting her out of Kuduran.


    JediFalcon
    Hmm? well, what do you think? There?s a difference between ?hope? and ?think.? Palpatine is crafty. Remember what happened at the very start of this story during the battle where Jacen died?


    Jainasolo101
    Jaina?s rescued, yes. That?s a plus. Though her condition is fairly worrysome. Anakin didn?t fall, but the best thing that came out of this is that he did recognize the potential for him falling.


    EGKenobi
    Thanks! :)


    JediMasterAmanda
    Questions, questions, questions? Given what we know of Palpatine from all the previous chapters in the story, what do you think?

    Otherwise you?ll just have to wait and find out. ;)


    GeneralKenobi7
    Thanks! I love writing Obi-Wan and R2. I love them both and it?s not something that I?ve really played around with much before since R2 is usually with Anakin. R2 is hilarious fun to write and plays off Obi-Wan quite well. [face_laugh]


    Anduli_Vader
    I knew someone was bound to have an ecstatic response like that somewhere along here. :p ?YAYAYAYAY!? :p he thing with the trade federation ship seemed rather appropriate when I was writing it. :p I couldn?t resist not adding it. ;)


    Lady_Misty
    Oh, I?d imagine his flying was pretty crazy.

    Obi-Wan:eek:AHHHHH!!!![face_sick]
    Kyp:eek:AHHHH!!!8-}
    Jaina[face_tired]
    R2:eek: beep[face_whistling]


    That?s an appropriate way to put. [face_laugh]


    JediQueenBee
    I guess you liked the chapter then. :p [:D]


    Serena
    Made it? for now.

    There?s always a ?for now.?


    Jon
    Thanks! [:D] Well, even though she?s free and they?re all alive (at the moment), there are a lot of complications in the situation. Yes? I can?t say more than that for fear of giving something away. ;)


    ratna
    Thank you!


    The_Slilent_One
    Free yes, clear? maybe not. [face_worried]

    [face_devil]


    JediQueenBee
    Am I going to answer that? o_O


    Darth-Semians
    Thank you. [:D]

    Unlike what I usually do and speculate about what might be happenning, I won't because turely I don't care what you decide to do. You are a great writer and should really consider doing it for real. If you have any non-Star Wars ideas floating in your mind, jot them down on a notepad and go from there. Who knows, with your abilities, you could end up with a New York Times Bestseller. Just sayin'.

    That is extremely high praise. Thanks. [face_blush] [face_blush] I love writing, but I can?t see myself as a professional writer. Acting, theatre and music are my first loves and what I want to do with my life. I perhaps could see myself writing in my free time (I do have an original novel in the works), but I don?t think I could do it for a living. The stress of dealing with deadlines and publishers and editors? I can?t write on demand. I really don?t know where I?m going with this, but there you have it. :)


    Diamond_Revelation
    Thanks! Well? what can I say? Hm. They?re in a bit of a sticky situation now, aren?t
     
  9. JediKaren

    JediKaren Jedi Youngling star 3

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    ACK! must know what happens next! This story is soooo addicting!
     
  10. p_stotts

    p_stotts Jedi Master star 4

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    Whoohoo! What an action-packed post! You literally had my heart pounding. Somehow, though, I think Palpatine survived. I mean, what was to prevent him from time traveling again? And where was Darth what's-his-name? Sorry, I'm terrible at remembering names.

    And now, how will they reunite with Padme and company?

    Good luck with your exams. Take a deep breath or two -- or one hundred -- and write when you can. I look forward to the next post now matter when it comes.
     
  11. Ocelotl_Nesto

    Ocelotl_Nesto Jedi Master star 4

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    that was fun!

    Knowing that Palpy still got away... I dont believe they finished him off.
     
  12. Lily87

    Lily87 Jedi Youngling

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    This gets better with every post!
     
  13. Talon_Kenobi

    Talon_Kenobi Jedi Master star 4

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    I had to get caught up. This is really starting to pick up. Hate to see what effects this is going to have on Jaina
     
  14. Idrelle_Miocovani

    Idrelle_Miocovani Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    JediKaren
    I?ll update as soon as I can! That?s the problem with addicting stories. You have to keep turning out chapters as fast as possible. I did start working on the next chapter last night, though ? I got one and a half paragraphs done before my Muse quit. :p At least it?s a start. 8-}


    p_stotts
    What an action-packed post! You literally had my heart pounding.

    One of the goals of an action chapter. ;) Yay, I succeeded! Hurrah!

    We can hope and pray that Palpatine did die, but how will we know for certain? You have an excellent point there. :) Darth Krayt was sent away before Anakin and the others arrived. He?s off on his own mission. [face_whistling]

    Well, they have a plan for reuinting with Padmé, Yoda, Bail and the others, right? As long as their ship doesn?t break down on them along the way or something, they should be able to make it to Mon Calamari safely.

    One hundred breaths seems like a good idea. Especially when my two most important things coming up in exam period are not written exams, but performances ? my jury and my audition for pretty much all of next year?s acting stuff. *deep breath*

    *returns to search for monologues*


    Ocelotl_Nesto
    Fun isn?t exactly the word I would use? but sure. And yeah, Palpatine?s death might be one of those things were you have to see it to believe it.


    Lily87
    Thank you!


    Talon_Kenobi
    That?s all right! [:D] Thanks for sticking with it! We?ll get into the effects of Delik-66 on Jaina more in the next upcoming chapters. :)


    Thanks for reading!
     
  15. Idrelle_Miocovani

    Idrelle_Miocovani Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Well, I surprised myself. I guess I'm back to being so stressed out that I'm doing a lot of writing again. As such, I was able to pull off another chapter. Hurrah!

    Thank you all for sticking through with this. :)

    And here's your promised chapter.






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    ;) [face_mischief]
     
  16. JediMasterAmanda

    JediMasterAmanda Jedi Master star 5

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    and I got my hopes up too. :( why is it the only time I ever fall for a prank is when I'm on these boards?
     
  17. Jaina_Solo_Goddess

    Jaina_Solo_Goddess Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Well, you successfully got me.

    ~Jaina
     
  18. p_stotts

    p_stotts Jedi Master star 4

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    [face_shame_on_you] That was just downright mean. [face_frustrated] ;) :D
     
  19. RK_Striker_JK_5

    RK_Striker_JK_5 Force Ghost star 7

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    *Sigh* How troublesome. :p
     
  20. DarthVaderette

    DarthVaderette Jedi Master star 2

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    :oops: Fell for that one Hook, Line and Sinker

    I at least hope a "real" update is coming soon 8-} :D
     
  21. blurt

    blurt Jedi Knight star 1

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    :eek: WHY!!!
     
  22. JediXManSerenaKenobi

    JediXManSerenaKenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    LOL! GOOD ONE, Idri!!!! [face_laugh][face_laugh]=D=
     
  23. Darth-Semians

    Darth-Semians Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Gotta admit, you got me. Glad to see you have some humor given all your... ah... things going.

    Darth-Semians

    [face_peace]

    P.S. don't ever do that again, or you will feel the full force of the Dark Side... [face_skull] [face_devil]
     
  24. GeneralKenobi7

    GeneralKenobi7 Jedi Knight star 4

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    [face_not_talking] You got me there:p
     
  25. Lady_Misty

    Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    :confused::confused::confused:

    Not laughing.

    [face_not_talking]
     
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