Story [Avatar: The Last Airbender] Someday (Zuko poem)

Someday
Author: smuggler_vola (known as Epic Duck on fanfiction.net)
Characters: Zuko, Ursa (indirectly)
Summary: Across the stars, across the sea. I will find you, just have faith in me

The stars in the sky
Not one shown that night
You vowed to never come back
As father watched you disappear from sight

No one stopped you
No one dared to try
But did you really have to leave
Without even saying goodbye

I was left alone
No one to calm my fears
With "father" and Azula
No one to dry my tears

I guess that isn't true
Uncle was always there for me
And he really did care
Though I was too stubborn to see

I don't know if you've heard
I'm the Fire Lord now
I have to unite the nations
But I'm not really sure I know how

A lot of work is left to do
All night and through the day
But I will find time to search for you
I'll find you someday

 

Hi smuggler_vola.

I found this poem both bittersweet and beautiful. The rhyming scheme seems to work perfectly here. Stanzas 1 & 3 were emotionally charged for me, and I especially liked the line 'Not one shown that night'. Thanks for sharing.

Well done.

 

This is so beautiful! I love it, especially the last two lines Great job! I hope you continue writing more in this world!

 

Very nice i liked it.