Saga "Daughter of Kenobi"------The Story of Sapphire

Congratulations on the reply and thank you for the reply. Dash Rendar have a wife? That should be interesting. I wonders how he meet her after the Jedi purge.

 

Well, good job! I wonder if Dash told the truth.

 

Intriguing plot twist. I can't wait to see where this goes

 

i feel like another great adventure is coming!

 

So when are you updating?

 

Well. I am FINALLY up to date with this thing and its a very interesting piece. Now I just wanted to point something out. This quote reading really stuck itself out to my eyes.

Well! What a sweeheart! Shucks, I wish I had a girl like that. Who would kill me if I went over to the darkside. Talk about tough love! Ouch. This is going to be interesting when I FINALLY get back to my darth luke fan fic and have him face Leia. Kill him immediately, sheesh. Not even try and turn him back first, not even a teeny bit?

Emperor: Rise Darth Skywalker

DS: Yes, master. Hey, what a sec. Saph put that down...YEAHHHH!!!!!

Emperor:

Dang. Besides that you have done a very good job with this piece. It is interesting seeing the turn of events had Obi-Wan Kenobi had a daughter, and you might want to check out my link. Its on the fan fic, I stopped doing evil Luke to do. Obi-Wan vs the Emperor. Its almost done, and I think you'd enjoy. But its just an invite. No pressure. I like how you make Sapphire seem like a real girl. It makes you think if Storm Troopers went to arrest her, she'd be at the spa getting a manicure. Now if Luke leaves her for her arch enemy, mara...lol Poor, poor Saphire.

 

Wow! Very nicely written. The dialog and action is very good, and I like the way you meld the canon into your story. Very nice.

Of course, MJ is one of my all-time fav. characters, and it's sad to see her not getting the chance to hook up w/ Luke, or am I wrong?

Again, enjoying the story. Up soon!

 

Moved story here.

 

That was definitely a pointed example of never let your guard down.

S.

 

THANK YOU! I'm so glad you posted! What a wonderful chapter. I can't believe she doesn't know what ysalamiri are, though. They should really make that required reading for all Jedi.

 

Great!
I believe that Sapphire must will have some ways to escape.

 

that was a nice long update! sapphire will get out of this cause she always does. i smelled something fishy when she landed on the planet. and the description of the twilek made me laugh.

 

Oh, ysalamiri!

Wonder how she's going to escape.

 

You always manage to keep the suspense going! It's funny she didn't notice the Force's absence earlier.

 

it's a month since you updated! i hope you didn't die or something. i am excited for the final battle with yoda, sapphire, and luke against vader, mara, and the emperor that you told me about!!!

 

*bumps*

 

Moved story here.

 

Rendar - interesting! Great update - it'll be good to see where you head with them next

 

I wonders how Sapphire is going to help that guy finding the wife of Dash Rendar? I'm not sure if I should believes the guy if I was Sapphire. It can be another trap. Who knows?

Good to see that she escaped, and I almost feel sorry for the guy. Having his house wrecked by a starship, ouch.

Sorry for being late in bumping this story, but I was busy with watching "Blackadder". Gotta love British comedies. Happy New Year.

 

So Dash was telling the truth after all, huh? Not sure I would be as trusting as Sapphire is being, though.

 

The plot continues to thicken. I don't know if I'd trust this guy. The whole thing could be an elaborate setup just to get her to unwittingly help him with a malicious task.

 

wow,so exciting!
Great update

 

GREAT UPDATE! LOL and in all caps too. We are getting somewhere now.

 

Moved story here.

 

That's a lovely update. However, I have to questions the wishdom of Sabre and the guy going to Coruscant. You would have thought that after Sabre's actions on Coruscant in the past, the security would be more tighter.

And poor Sabre, she's being chased by Mara Jade.