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Beyond - Legends Episode VII : Dawn of a New Era

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Rush_Limbaugh, May 11, 2003.

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  1. Darth_Elmo

    Darth_Elmo Jedi Youngling

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    #1.
    Cloaked figure whitnessing the explosion from aboard another SD. I can perfectly imagine this scene
     
  2. QUI_GON_QUINN

    QUI_GON_QUINN Jedi Master star 2

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    Number 1 for me as well please!
     
  3. Darth_Minx

    Darth_Minx Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I guess #1, but then I'd like to go with #3.
     
  4. GAThrawnIGF

    GAThrawnIGF Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Hmm, either #3 or #1. OK, I guess #1. We have to see the bad guy first and then Lando or Luke! Plus #1 sorta mirrors the end of Dark Forces. So I'll go with #1

     
  5. Rush_Limbaugh

    Rush_Limbaugh Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Ok, it seems that we're decided. I'll send the new post soon
     
  6. Rush_Limbaugh

    Rush_Limbaugh Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Ok...here it is


    :: A cloaked figure sits in the bridge of a Star Destroyer, watching the I.R.A lose the day. They fidget somewhat as more and more, the TIE fighters drop::

    Cloaked Figure: ( in female voice) Well. Looks like we did a good job defending against that little docking trick they do...

    :: A man turns around from some controls. His suit is a white Imperial suit. His skin is blue, and his eyes are completly black. He looks stuborn and angery::

    Thrawn: We used more anti-penitration sheilds! I don't understand how they got through!

    Cloaked Figure: (stands up) Hmm. It seems that we'll need more of them doesn't it?

    Thrawn: We don't need your attitude right now! We in the middle of a battle right now.

    Cloaked Figure: Battle? You call this a battle? Eh...they had this "battle" before it even started...

    Thrawn: Well? What do you suggest we do??

    Cloaked Figue: Pulling back is an option.

    Thrawn: ( upset) What??? Retreat??

    Cloaked Figure: I don't see much of a better option, unless you plan to leave this ship in electro-cuffs.

    ::Thrawn paces for a moment...he grows more angery, the more he thinks...::

    Thrawn: Captin! Put us into lightspeed! Take us back to the base!

    Officer: Yes sir.

    :: There is a view of Thrawn, just looking out of the window of the bridge, with his hands crossed behind his back. The stars begin to seem to fly towards the ship, as the ship goes into lightspeed. The ship then dissapears into space::


    What happens next?


    1.) Cut to Luke on Courasant, in a torn down, abandoned building. It's shaped with one large pillar in the middle, surrounded by four smaller pillars. This building has obviously been run down for 35 years at least.

    2.)Cut to Luke, sitting in a pure white room, levitating off the ground, obviously tapping into the force...

    3.) Han and Leia in cockpit of Falcon, finishing up the battle....


    The Voting is up!!!
     
  7. Darth_Minx

    Darth_Minx Jedi Padawan star 4

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    #1 is kind of out there, so I'm curious enough to vote for it ;)
     
  8. Tegarend

    Tegarend Jedi Youngling star 3

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    #2 ... I love meditations
     
  9. Blyte_the_Noghri

    Blyte_the_Noghri Jedi Youngling star 1

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    I vote for #1
     
  10. Skin_Merchant

    Skin_Merchant Jedi Youngling star 1

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    #1 Man, this is getting cooler and cooler. Keep it up, Rush



    Rush is Right!
     
  11. Darth_Pooh_Bear

    Darth_Pooh_Bear Jedi Master star 1

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    #1 Good job so far Rush!
     
  12. Tegarend

    Tegarend Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I guess Rush is busy with his Episode III script part :)

    Any writer who wants mine can PM me. This of course belongs better on the other thread.
     
  13. Rush_Limbaugh

    Rush_Limbaugh Jedi Padawan star 4

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    AHHHHHH MATRIX 2 MATRIX 2 MATRIX 2 AHHHHHHHHH

    Also...here is the tally


    1.) Luke in abandond building----4 Votes

    2.) Luke levitating--------------1 Vote

    3.) Han/ Leia finishing work-----0 Votes


    Keep them coming...new section tommarow at 10:35 am
     
  14. KnightKatarn05

    KnightKatarn05 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    defintely #1.

    Please, visit the Before the Saga Forum, vote in the Choose your Adventure!
     
  15. A-Windsor

    A-Windsor Jedi Youngling star 3

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    2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  16. Rush_Limbaugh

    Rush_Limbaugh Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Part of me wants to write now...but ehhhhh I cant! This next part will be cool either way. * unless you pick 3* (not to sway votes or anything...it just seems that noone wants that...but yeah 1 or 2 bring good things
     
  17. Darth_Elmo

    Darth_Elmo Jedi Youngling

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  18. QUI_GON_QUINN

    QUI_GON_QUINN Jedi Master star 2

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    #1 - sounds very sweet.

    Rush - If you want me to keep a cleaned up version of the script and post it every so often (the way I've done with Scoob's) then let me know
     
  19. Rush_Limbaugh

    Rush_Limbaugh Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Umm. Anytime now would be nice QUI_GON_QUINN...how about after this post? Here is the next section...Luke on Courasant!


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    :: Luke stands up, and climbs out of his X-Wing star fighter. R-2 is lowered down out of the back. Luke looks up. He sees a large white building. Charred and darkened from laser blasts and time. This building has been abandond for years, obviously. It's apprearance only adds to the fact that it stands in a run down, unused section of Courasant::

    R2: *Beep whooo*

    Luke: (looks to R2) Yeah. Kindof kreepy, but Im heading inside.

    R2: * Weep wa weep!*

    :: Luke begins to walk up the lage staircase that leads to the main door. As he walks, he sees pieces of statues, and wall writings all over. He looks at them as he passes. As he reaches the front gate, he presses the open button. Locked. He then makes a fist, and moves is slowly to his right. The door opens, and he begins to walk in.::

    R2: *Woop wee! Weep wahhh!*

    Luke: No R2. Stay with the ship. I'll be back shortly.

    R2: *Wep woooh*

    As Luke wanders the halls, he begins to hear voices. Voices from the past. Screams. Laser blasts. He constantly looks around for the source, but none is found. As he keeps walking, he comes to another door. He walks near, and it opens automaticly. He walks inside. Darkness fills the room. Barly anything can be seen. He looks into the far corner, where there is an energy box, glowing with electricity. He walks over, stumbing over things as he walks, and turns on the power. Lights begin to flicker on. Computers begin to start running, and room becomes very clear.

    He can see books. Books everywhere. On the floor, on the walls, on the shelves. Luke looks around in astonishment. He can't beleive his eyes.


    Luke: I know this place!

    ::CUT to Luke walking up to another door. Outside the windows its obvious that he is on a high floor. As he gets higher, he comes to one last door. He walks up to it, and he holds down the lever for it to open. The door opens slowly, and creaks as it does. he walks in.

    This room is circular. Windows on all sides, and chairs. Chairs that surround the middle of the room. Some have been tipped over, some have not been moved, but it is quite obvious to Luke, that he has come to the "right place."

    There are blast marks on the walls, and cuts on the floors and walls. Luke looks down. To his right he sees a Storm trooper's helmet. He shakes his head. As he continues looking around, he sees a few lightsabers. Scattered on the floor. Luke closes his eyes, and just then....


    Voice: Yes. This is the old Jedi Temple.

    Whos voice is it????

    1.) Force Ghost of Anakin

    2.) Force Ghost of Obi-Wan

    3.) Force Ghost of Yoda

    Votings up. I think this could be cool any way!

     
  20. Blyte_the_Noghri

    Blyte_the_Noghri Jedi Youngling star 1

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  21. Rush_Limbaugh

    Rush_Limbaugh Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Wow! A response! Took a while there...
     
  22. Darth_Minx

    Darth_Minx Jedi Padawan star 4

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  23. Rush_Limbaugh

    Rush_Limbaugh Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Do you all like it? Or is it just that bad??
     
  24. KnightKatarn05

    KnightKatarn05 Jedi Youngling star 2

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  25. Crimson_Sabre

    Crimson_Sabre Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Mega ditto, Maha Rushie!

    #2.
     
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