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Saga Freefall 1&2 the morning after the wedding. (A&P,) Author Announce re Obi-Wan's tale 1 September

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by DarthBreezy, Apr 2, 2003.

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  1. -JediKnight-

    -JediKnight- Jedi Youngling

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    Great post DB !
     
    -JediKnight-, Aug 31, 2003
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  2. sidious618

    sidious618 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    I am not a fan of A/As but for some reason I liked this one. A beautiful job.
     
    sidious618, Aug 31, 2003
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  3. DarthBreezy

    DarthBreezy Chosen One star 6

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    Wow!! Thanks for finding this!!

    I have been toying with part three since the beginning but While You were Out kinda got in the way... Hopefully by the end of this month I shall have the Obi-wan segmant here!!
    [face_love]
     
    DarthBreezy, Aug 31, 2003
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  4. JDH3

    JDH3 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hey DB, glad to hear that Obi's tale is on the way. I didn't go back to page one but I have a feeling that I...lurked.<--hangs head in shame:) Anyhow if that was the case then let me say...this fic is great!
     
    JDH3, Sep 1, 2003
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  5. -JediKnight-

    -JediKnight- Jedi Youngling

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    Me too, can't wait for the Obi-Wan segment!

    -JK-
     
    -JediKnight-, Sep 1, 2003
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  6. PatttyB0123

    PatttyB0123 Former RSA star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    This story flows nicely. I read poetry in your story. The actions moves slowly but in a gently way that make me feel the story into my heart. The way Anakin talks and touch Padme. Her feelings. His feelings.

    Good job.
     
    PatttyB0123, Sep 1, 2003
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  7. anakin_girl

    anakin_girl Jedi Knight star 6

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    Good job as usual, Breezy. :) Can't wait for the Obi part. :)
     
    anakin_girl, Sep 1, 2003
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  8. _across-the-stars_

    _across-the-stars_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    DB, those were lovely. Beautiful job capturing their emotions and thoughts.

    And I agree on the 'first-time' thing. :D [face_love]

    ~ats~
     
    _across-the-stars_, Oct 17, 2003
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