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Saga Last words Ep III theory of Ani and Padme's last conversation

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Hananiah, Mar 20, 2003.

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  1. Hananiah

    Hananiah Jedi Master star 4

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    Padme: You were talking with Palpatine again
    Anakin: So?
    Padme:So? Ani look what he's doing to you He's turning you against me, against Obi Wan..."
    Anakin: This is what this is about, this is about Obi Wan
    Padme: You're turning away from the people that love you. Who care for you.
    Anakin: You care about me? If you cared you would agree with me
    Padme: so just because I think you're wrong about one thing, you're leaving throwing away are marriage?
    Marriage isn't blind obedeance Anakin it's about mutual love and friendship
    Anakin: You don't understand
    Padme: OF COURSE I DON'T UNDERSTAND! (Padme breathes deeply and when she is speaking it is calmer) Anakin something's wrong with Palpatine he's corrupted and evil
    Anakin: He's my friend, he's a good man
    Padme: He hurt Obi Wan. (There is silence and Padme presses on. Has she got through to him?) You want to know why Obi Wan's lying in a coma? Palpatine arranged it, he got you out of the way and then he set the trap
    (But she's pushed to far, Anakin runs his hands through his hair, looking anywhere but and Padme)
    Anakin: No you're lying, he wouldn't do that
    Padme: He did it Anakin. And he's coming after me, he killed my parents Ani, the fire wasn't coincedence, they said so, someone killed my family. Anakin you have to make a choice, now, either come with me or go to Palpatine, you can't have both.
    The door opens and Palpatine walks up beside Anakin, he puts a possessive hand on Anakin's shoulder.
    Behind Padme, Obi Wan lays in the coma, sititng beside him is Sabe.
    There is silence, as Anakin looks between his wife and his new master.
    Then he turns away and walks away, missing the manipulative and triumphant smile Palpatine gives Padme
    Padme stares at him, her dark eyes cold and dark
    Padme: Win a battle. Lose the war
    Palpatine leaves and Padme slumps to the floor holding her stomach.
    Padme: We haven't lost daddy yet

    DISCLAIMER: I OWN NOTHING!!!!

     
  2. -LadyVader-

    -LadyVader- Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Dec 30, 2002
    Great description of the last conversation! This would be breathtaking in novel format.

    -LadyVader
     
  3. Yazid_Skywalker

    Yazid_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jul 10, 2002
    Gd job Hananiah. I liked the "Daddy" part.
     
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