Not worthy, JA, anguish, ending three

Hey, this was really good.... All three endings were really great.
What's the big fascination with putting your favorite characters through loads of torture? I do it too, I've got to get my friend (a budding psychologist) to analyze this.
And what's this thing about sith hampsters?
Anyway great work, really!

 

Sorry to be so slow to respond - missed the second post entirely until just now. It's just awful when things like jobs and responsibilities interfere with the more important items on the agenda - like keeping up with what's going on here.

Hey, Swede - you probably know me well enough to believe me when I say that I found Ending #2 even more angsty than #1; by gum, if Obi had to go, I want the Master gone too. Although I don't really hate Qui-Gon - most of the time - I am not a big fan of how he treats his padawan - and I do NOT want him surviving if my Obi is destined for the ash heap.

However - the final ending is sweet without being so cloying that it gives one a cavity. Nice imaging; nice dialog. And all three were well written.

Good job.

CYN

 

That was perfect!!!

 

I like mush Always leads to happy smilely people

Nice story Swede. Very interesting to have different endings like that

 

Wonderful ending. I love happy endings. And there was just the right amount of mush.

 

Oh, very good. The third ending was wonderful, brought a happy smile to my face. The funny thing is, now that I've had time to sit and digest it all, I think the second ending is probably my favorite and I keep wondering how does Qui-Gon go on after this?

 

I've just read this, and SwedishJedi, you ROCK! All 3 endings were great. Bravo, bravo!!

 

Loved each and every one of them but I must admit I prefer a live and breathing Obi-Wan!

 

Very nice, Swede

Definately the most prefered ending

Ah, mush. I love it.

 

loved the happy mushy ending. See even the little hamsters are smiling (oh wait, that's because it's dinner time)

 

Oooohhhh, that was the best ending of all.
*kneels and hugs them both*
*Obi cryes out in pain

"Ups, ehm sorry."

*Qui shots a stern gaze*: "Don't hurt my Padawan."

"Hey, easy, that was not my intention." *leave murmuring* "At least, I don't just hug him because I'm feeling guilty."

*Qui jumps to his feet* "Say what?"

"Nothing!" *took off in a dead run*

 

Yay! They live! Both of them!

That was great, Swede!

(But how could you have forgotten that you haven't finished this?! )

 

Sorry to disturb/ go off topic but WHAT IS THE THING WITH THE HAMPSTERS? Are they like spectral hampsters sent to harry lazy authors to the ends of the earth unless they post? Hey, that reminds me of the Wild Hunt, which is (duh) where I got my name from.
Since I'm posting I'll rave about what a good story this was some more.

 

Swede, wonderful job! Though, I found the second ending to be more heartwrenching than the first...both of which were phenominal, to reiterate. To be the one left behind can be infinitely more painful than leaving the world with another, especially when the dying is a child.

The "happy" was a delightful mix of angst and pain...the only way I like my Obi happiness . Keep up the wonderful job and feel free to regale us with any more of these little snippets your twisted little mind concocts.

~Antigone

 

Well, first, a big thanks to everyone that read this. You're the reason I continue to write this.

Wild_Huntress: The hamsters were a tool the mobs came up in another fic of mine. Origanally they were just plain old, rabid ones but they slowly turned into the Sith, vapmire crazied ones that you see today. They follow me around the boards and attack when I don't post often enough on my stories.

Cyn: Thanks again, just the fact that you read this made me grin maddly. That you like it has me amazed.

Abbi_Cee: I keep wondering how does Qui-Gon go on after this?
No, no, no. I don't need any more plot bunnies. I have enough thank you very much. But, yes I wonder how he goes on after this too.

Kitara: Well, at least the hamsters are happy. That's all that matters.

JediClare: How's I forget? I told you, I got really busy. Two jobs and your boyfriend visiting you can do that to a gal.

Antigone: More 'twisted' snippets, eh? I'll take you up on that. I do have one in mind but I don't think it would be allowed on here. I'd have to cut some out. But we'll see. I have to get through Eyes, Bonds, and the other three in-progress ones before that.

 

Ahh the mush

That was great!

 

Well done Swede Don't worry, you had just the right amount of mush to satisfy me

But I gotta say, out of the three endings, I think number two was the best. It had more emotion behind it, and probably would make a really great story to see how Qui-Gon delt with his Padawan's death

But enough of that, when are we going to get a new post on Bonds

 

Thanks for explaining the hampsters, Swede, and once again- great job!

 

Awww, dang it! Looks like I missed the ending! Well, it was awesome! Nice and mushy. *Contented sigh*

Looks like I missed the whole weather thing, too. I would like to say that I live in Phoenix, Arizona, and a few weeks ago it was 113 degrees. Thank the Force for backyard pools!!!!

Great, Swede!!!!

KenobisGirl

 

Wonderful, Swede, who does'nt love mush, but my favorite ending was #2 I guess I'm a sucker for anguish. 7

 

Just found this. Great job, Swede!

I loved all three endings, and just in the sequence I prefer it. I love angst and all but only if there's a good end

Or in your case the good end is the last one

I, too, liked the second most of all, though.

Nifet

 

My padawan pointed this out, and I'm glad she did. Very lovely story, Swede. I liked all three endings!!!

 

This rocks, Swede.

Though you did surprise me with the 'semi bad'.

It was worse than the 'bad one'.

Yea, I'm an Obi-fan.