Beyond - Legends The Age of Heroes (post-NJO AU: Anakin, Jaina, Jacen, L/M, H/L, Tahiri, Kyp,Jag) Sequel 2/2/07!

TKL: One more thought - this story is going to be a great present for people who share their birthdays with groundhogs

Oh yeah, I forgot we were both Aquariuses I of course planned it this way. Hope you like your birthday present






Okay, here's the newest teaser Not as exciting as the last one, but hopefully there's some interesting stuff in here that gets your imaginations going. The first part is a nearly complete dp for the fic, and the second part is a list of planets/systems seen in the story. Lots of new characters and locations in this one:

Dramatis Personae

Ackbar; retired admiral (male Mon Calamari)
Aero Gin; bounty hunter (female, unknown species)
Alema Rar; Jedi Knight (female Twi'lek)
Anakin Solo; Jedi Knight (male human)
Ayddar Nylykerka; GA intelligence director (male Tammarian)
Baliss Phlora; farmer (female human)
Ben Skywalker; child (male human)
Booster Terrik; smuggler (male human)
C-3PO; protocol droid
Cakhmaim; Leia Solo's bodyguard (male Noghri)
Callista Ming; former Jedi Knight (female human)
Cenn Stellwert; GFI officer (male human)
Cilghal; Jedi Master (female Mon Calamari)
Daryn Dag'nar; agent, Caamas Justice Front (female Bothan)
Dorrin Kogg; senate speaker (male Sermarian)
Emala; war profiteer (female Squib)
Faybol; Darth Malig's Hand (male Kuhr)
Fyor Rodan; Chief of State of the Galactic Alliance (male human)
Garm Bel Iblis; Alliance General (male human)
Gilad Pellaeon; Imperial Remnant Grand Admiral (male human)
Gorl; Infantry commander of Raithian forces on Felucia (male human)
Grees; war profiteer (male Squib)
Han Solo; captain, Millennium Falcon (male human)
Hurim Krawl; crimelord (male Neimoidian)
Isolder; Hapan Prince (male human)
Jacen Solo; Jedi Knight, King the of Hapes Consortium (male human)
Jagged Fel; CEDF Commander, Vanguard Squadron (male human)
Jaina Solo; Jedi Knight (female human)
Jarl Pace; Imperial Remnant General (male human)
Jysella Horn; Jedi Apprentice (female human)
Kam Solusar; Jedi Master (male human)
Kenth Hamner; Jedi Master (male human)
Kirana Ti; Jedi Master (female human)
Kol Rénin; General of the Raithian Armies, Sith Apprentice (Darth Rapier) (male human)
Kurol; shared consciousness of Faybol's brood
Kyle Katarn; Jedi Master (male human)
Kyp Durron; Jedi Master (male human)
Kyrn; CEDF Colonel (female Chiss)
Lando Calrissian; businessman (male human)
Leia Organa Solo; Jedi Knight (female human)
Lorra Klorne; Alliance Commander (female human)
Lowbacca; Jedi Knight (male Wookiee)
Luke Skywalker; Jedi Master (male human)
Malig; Dark Lord of the Sith (male, unknown species)
Mara Jade Skywalker; Jedi Master (female human)
Meewalh; Leia Solo's bodyguard (female Noghri)
Mirax Horn; art dealer (female human)
Mulla Habbas; Minister of State (male human)
Neget; smuggler (male Rodian)
Nyll; Commander of Raithian Elite Commando Units (male human)
Qixiz; administrator, The Rapture (male Falleen)
R2-D2; astromech droid
Raynar Thul; Jedi Knight (male human)
Releqy A'kla; senator (female Caamasi)
Saba Sebatyne; Jedi Master (female Barabel)
Shada D'ukal; Talon Karrde's business associate (female human)
Sien Sovv; Supreme Commander of the Galactic Alliance(male Sullustan)
Sligh; war profiteer (male Squib)
Spek Tavin; slicer (female human)
Streen; Jedi Master (male Human)
Strift Zonn; smuggler (female human)
Ta'a Chume; former Queen Mother (female human)
Ta'laam Ranth; senator (male Gotal)
Tahiri Veila; Jedi Knight (female human)
Talon Karrde; independent information broker (male human)
Tenel Ka; Jedi Knight, Queen Mother of the Hapes Consortium (female human)
Tekli; Jedi Knight (female Chadra-Fan)
Tesar Sebatyne; Jedi Knight (female Barabel)
Than Ulgran; GFS director (male human)
Tionne; Jedi Knight (female human)
Traest Kre'fey; admiral (male Bothan)
Tresina Lobi; Jedi Master (female Chev)
Triebakk; senator (male Wookiee)
Valin Horn; Jedi Apprentice (male human)
Vergere; former Jedi Knight (female

 

I'm eagerly awaiting the new story. I discovered some of your older stories. You write an awesome Kyp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He is the way I imagine him and not the way Stackpole set out to destroy in his work.

Thanks for the fun!

 

Lots of new characters!Now,I'm a little behind in the EU,so could someone tell me what a Squib is?Also,I remember Baliss Phlora having a small part in TAOH.Will she be important in this story?It also looks like the Cammasi might play a part. Now to the planets. Several jump out at me,including Cato Neimoidia,Kothlis,and Hoth.But most of all Myrkr. Interesting teasers Yobi.

 

Hi, Yobi!

Love the character list. I get to see some minor characters I'm rather fond of.

Looking forward to this

 

Cato Neimoidia? Well now, that's interesting. I hadn't given much thought to the big industrial powers of the galaxy. Still, the Trade Federation, the Commerce Guild, the Banking Clan, and all the former CIS powers are still around, and they'd certainly have a stake in the Raithians' plans for the galaxy.

Would the Jedi go to them seeking allies? That would be rich!

 

iamobiwan: I'm eagerly awaiting the new story.

Glad to hear it!

I discovered some of your older stories. You write an awesome Kyp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He is the way I imagine him and not the way Stackpole set out to destroy in his work.

Aww, thanks Its always nice to hear from the fans of a character that they think you got them right. Kyp's always been one of my favorites, and he does seem to get a raw deal from authors sometimes.

Thanks for the fun!

Thank you!





corran: Lots of new characters!

Yep. New OC's and some new canon characters from canon.

Now,I'm a little behind in the EU,so could someone tell me what a Squib is?

Sure! The Squibs are some of the most fun aliens in canon. Check out Tatooine Ghost if you get a chance. I promise you'll fall in love with them. They also have a few short scenes in The Swarm War

[image=http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y165/YodaKenobi/Databank_Squib_colored.jpg]

Squibs.

Also,I remember Baliss Phlora having a small part in TAOH.Will she be important in this story?

Not really in this story, but she will definitely be very important in the series. I didn't just throw her in for the fun of it

It also looks like the Cammasi might play a part.

That might be deceptive

Now to the planets. Several jump out at me,including Cato Neimoidia,Kothlis,and Hoth.But most of all Myrkr.

Oh yeah. That one's going to be fun. I should mention that we don't actually make it to the surface of a couple of these, but are just in the space around the planets.

Interesting teasers Yobi.

Thanks




Dooku-Darklighter: Hi, Yobi!
Love the character list. I get to see some minor characters I'm rather fond of.

Thanks Glad their are some of your favorites there.

Looking forward to this

Glad to hear it We're less than 2 weeks away now.





Trayus: Cato Neimoidia? Well now, that's interesting. I hadn't given much thought to the big industrial powers of the galaxy. Still, the Trade Federation, the Commerce Guild, the Banking Clan, and all the former CIS powers are still around, and they'd certainly have a stake in the Raithians' plans for the galaxy.

The Trade Federation and Commerce Guild we're actually disbanded when the Empire took control. But the Banking Clan is still going strong. So the visit to Neimoidia really has nothing to do with the Trade Federation

Would the Jedi go to them seeking allies? That would be rich!

You're on to something It will probably be clear after next week's teasers actually.





Next week I'll post a couple teaser scenes from the actual fic. And then it will be time to start

 

That is one impressive DP!!!!!



I can't wait for the start of your new fic...I'm anticipating many, many, late nights reading and sore eyes from being too close to the computer screen!!!

I eagerly await the next teaser....

 

I'm back and got everything working. I think...

YK: Ackbar; retired admiral (male Mon Calamari)

Cool.

Garm Bel Iblis; Alliance General (male human)
Gilad Pellaeon; Imperial Remnant Grand Admiral (male human)

Bringing out the heavy hitters now aren't we?

Jagged Fel; CEDF Commander, Vanguard Squadron (male human)
Jaina Solo; Jedi Knight (female human)

Are we to notice that the two of them are next to each other on the list and read something into that?

Jarl Pace; Imperial Remnant General (male human)

Hmmmm, does this mean that the Empire will send in ground forces...

It would be so ironic if the Empire had to bail out the Jedi.

Kurol; shared consciousness of Faybol's brood

Think I found a picture of one of the Kurol:

[image=http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r213/CloneCmdrWedge/Sithwraith.jpg]

I'm really asking for it, aren't I?

Kyle Katarn; Jedi Master (male human)

The situation can't be that bad. Just send Kyle to take out the Raithians and the Sith.

Nyll; Commander of Raithian Elite Commando Units (male human)

I'll show him an Elite Commando Unit...

[image=http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r213/CloneCmdrWedge/RepCommandos.jpg]



Vergere; former Jedi Knight (female Fosh)*

Lord Poultry... Rise.

Wedge Antilles; retired general (male human)



I'll bet that he doesn't stay retired for long.

Cato Neimoidia

Hmmm...

[cut to scene of Jacen and Wrev locked in a lightsaber battle on top of a floating mechanical city that cruises hundreds of meters above a lush planet]

[cut to scene of Jaina being kicked off the floating city mentioned before, and as the camera pans you can see her shrinking towards the green and blue floor hundreds of meters below]

Cato Neimoidia...?

Myrkr

Interesting...

Are they going on an ill-advised and suicidal mission to eliminate some bio-weapon that the Raithians have developed?

Next week I'll post a couple teaser scenes from the actual fic. And then it will be time to start

Sounds like a plan.

 

I think they're only next to each other because the DP is in alphabetical order...whether something happens between them will be just coincidence....but I hope something does...

 

I know that's most likely why, but I like to stir up trouble if I can.

 

*fixed

 

One question - I noticed you have Jacen Solo as a Jedi Knight, but not King of Hapes. Has something changed we should know about or do you have typo?

 

Ant: That is one impressive DP!!!!!

Thanks

I can't wait for the start of your new fic...I'm anticipating many, many, late nights reading and sore eyes from being too close to the computer screen!!!

Oh, the fun! I'm glad you're excited about it.

I eagerly await the next teaser....

Will hopefully be fun. One is a Mara scene

Thanks again!





Wedge: I'm back and got everything working. I think...

Yay!

Bringing out the heavy hitters now aren't we?

Absolutely No Thrawn though

Are we to notice that the two of them are next to each other on the list and read something into that?

Just that they're in alphabetical order by first name

Hmmmm, does this mean that the Empire will send in ground forces...

It could. Pace was in TLF, for those who remember. He was the only other surviving member of Mara's commando team that infiltrated Shimrra's palace.

It would be so ironic if the Empire had to bail out the Jedi.

It would

Think I found a picture of one of the Kurol:
I'm really asking for it, aren't I?



You're lucky we're friends

The situation can't be that bad. Just send Kyle to take out the Raithians and the Sith.

Why don't the Jedi think of this?

I'll show him an Elite Commando Unit...

That is a good one

Lord Poultry... Rise.



I'll bet that he doesn't stay retired for long.

I'll bet not too

Cato Neimoidia

Cato Neimoidia...?

It's possible

Interesting...
Are they going on an ill-advised and suicidal mission to eliminate some bio-weapon that the Raithians have developed?

Actually... something like that dominates the first 12 or so posts Though it has nothing to do with Myrkr. The Raithians have developed and adopted some new weapons since AoH left off

Sounds like a plan.

Glad to see you're enthused






Ant: I think they're only next to each other because the DP is in alphabetical order...whether something happens between them will be just coincidence....but I hope something does...

I'll keep that in mind




Wedge: I know that's most likely why, but I like to stir up trouble if I can.

Well then the most interesting sequence is:

Luke Skywalker; Jedi Master (male human)
Malig; Dark Lord of the Sith (male, unknown species)
Mara Jade Skywalker; Jedi Master (female human)

Malig is coming between Luke and Mara!




Whitey: Danni Quee; sex kitten (female human)
Tenel Ka; Sith fodder (shemale human)



I will keep your edits in mind





Telanna: One question - I noticed you have Jacen Solo as a Jedi Knight, but not King of Hapes. Has something changed we should know about or do you have typo?

Not a typo, but an oversight! Thanks for the head's-up I also forgot to put "Hapes" on the list of planets. I'll change that right away.





Teaser scenes up on Friday

 

Nice dramatis personae, YK.

But I like Whitey's better

 

great post, really liked it.

 

Booyah!

 

Dramatis Personae
...
Emala; war profiteer (female Squib)
...
Grees; war profiteer (male Squib)
...
Sligh; war profiteer (male Squib)

Oh, no! The Squibs! What are these guys up to? Or is your story the first step of FADA's vengeance against Denning's characters?

Daryn Dag'nar; agent, Caamas Justice Front (female Bothan)

A radical Caamasi? I guess we're in for a change...

Mulla Habbas; Minister of State (male human)

Minister of State, huh? Is that his reward for bringing the galaxy to its knees?

...he was the guy who got the information about the rigged election from Faybol, wasn't he?

*is too lazy to check *

Qixiz; administrator, The Rapture (male Falleen)

Not a name I've heard before, I think. A new OC? I like the name. I like the name of his ship / space station / city / planet / whatever even more! And he's a Falleen. That's a plus!

Very ambitious DP! Again!

Another question (well, several):
1. Darth Malig; what does his name mean?

Sorry, but the weird 'Darth Who' contest forced me to question the meaning of every name...

2. How does Mr Malig feel about the 'Rule of Two'? You know, with Mr or Mrs Hâvok wanting Mr Rapier's job...

Alright, I believe we won't get an answer to that anytime soon, but it doesn't hurt to ask, right?

Only a few more days! I'm ready!!!

 

Spike: Nice dramatis personae, YK.

Thanks!

But I like Whitey's better

Me too, actually






sdhfs: great post, really liked it.

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it





Whitey: Booyah!

I'm just not sure how the whole "shemale" thing will go over with TK fans





Palpy: Oh, no! The Squibs! What are these guys up to? Or is your story the first step of FADA's vengeance against Denning's characters?



No way. I love the Squibs I like Juun and Tarfang a lot too. The quirky aliens are normally the best parts of Denning's books

A radical Caamasi? I guess we're in for a change...

Well, a radical Bothan, but it has something to do with Caamas.

Minister of State, huh? Is that his reward for bringing the galaxy to its knees?

Exactly. Favors for favors.

...he was the guy who got the information about the rigged election from Faybol, wasn't he?
*is too lazy to check *

You got it right. He was the dude who let his home planet be attacked to gain sympathy and unveiled the data about the stolen election at the special senate session.

Not a name I've heard before, I think. A new OC?

Yep!

I like the name. I like the name of his ship / space station / city / planet / whatever even more!

Hehe. We'll get into what it is in the story

And he's a Falleen. That's a plus!

I've never written one before, so it's a first for me.

Very ambitious DP! Again!

Thanks!

Another question (well, several):
1. Darth Malig; what does his name mean?

"Malig" comes from the word "Malignant". Which means:

1. Showing great malevolence; disposed to do evil.
2. Highly injurious; pernicious.
3. Pathology.

a. Threatening to life; virulent: a malignant disease.
b. Tending to metastasize; cancerous. Used of a tumor.

Sorry, but the weird 'Darth Who' contest forced me to question the meaning of every name...

Yeah, that was a lot of fun I submitted "Hâvok" and it didn't make it, obviously

2. How does Mr Malig feel about the 'Rule of Two'? You know, with Mr or Mrs Hâvok wanting Mr Rapier's job...
Alright, I believe we won't get an answer to that anytime soon, but it doesn't hurt to ask, right?

Right, I can't really answer that. But we don't know that the future Darth Hâvok will exactly take, or want, Rapier's job...

Only a few more days! I'm ready!!!

A week from tomorrow to be exact!

Thanks for your reply





Scenes from LotS2 posted tomorrow!

 

Proud are we, Whitey?

 

YK: Absolutely No Thrawn though

Hopefully that is rectified by the third one.

Just that they're in alphabetical order by first name

Sure....

It could. Pace was in TLF, for those who remember. He was the only other surviving member of Mara's commando team that infiltrated Shimrra's palace.

Ah, I see. Didn't remember him.

It would

Exactly.

Why don't the Jedi think of this?

Because then the story would go something like:

Leia sent Kyle Katarn to rescue Luke. Kyle went to Dennon, but Darth Malig, Darth Rapier, and Faybol with his Kurol got in his way. Kyle stares at them and they run away in fear and take their armies with them. Kyle then rescued Luke and arrested Rodan.


Or something like that.

That is a good one

Speaking of that, I got HALO for my laptop earlier this week. I...can't...stop...playing...it...

Actually... something like that dominates the first 12 or so posts Though it has nothing to do with Myrkr. The Raithians have developed and adopted some new weapons since AoH left off

I hope I didn't jinx anything...



Malig is coming between Luke and Mara!

Yeah, he is... Just like how Jaina and Jag are together...

Yeah, that was a lot of fun I submitted "Hâvok" and it didn't make it, obviously

Ah-ha so it is Jacen that becomes Darth Hâvok.

Speaking of that Darth Who contest, what do you think of the nominees?

 

No way. I love the Squibs. I like Juun and Tarfang a lot too. The quirky aliens are normally the best parts of Denning's books.

If you say so...

Well, a radical Bothan, but it has something to do with Caamas.

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Reading is obviously a skill I have yet to master...

You got it right. He was the dude who let his home planet be attacked to gain sympathy and unveiled the data about the stolen election at the special senate session.

I hope Darth Hâvok will finish him off. I don't know why, but...I promise I'll dance if it does happen.

"Malig" comes from the word "Malignant". Which means:

1. Showing great malevolence; disposed to do evil.
2. Highly injurious; pernicious.
3. Pathology.

a. Threatening to life; virulent: a malignant disease.
b. Tending to metastasize; cancerous. Used of a tumor.

Good choice! Thanks for explaining it. Sometimes it's hard for a non-native speaker to figure out all the meanings.

Right, I can't really answer that. But we don't know that the future Darth Hâvok will exactly take, or want, Rapier's job...

Yes, that was more or less the answer I expected...

 

LOL!

I love your signature, Palpy!!!

 

Looking forward to the next story.

 

*blows dust off keyboard* Wow. It feels like it?s been forever since I?ve posted in here.

TGIF!

I can't say if you're right, but I can think of several reasons why TK wouldn't be happy about a baby. For one, she might think her husband is insane, or that there's no where for their child to grow up since they're being hunted by everyone...

Hm. I forgot about the whole Jacen?s-not-right-in-the-head subplot. I guess that would put a damper on a relationship.

Well, Hâvok apparently asks that Malig remove it

Ah, so that?s who he was talking to. That last line of the trailer confused me.

I feel like I'm in TKL's Force Evolution threads

Hee. It?s been a while since I?ve been in the Cantina, but I remember my roots. *waves to TKL*

Maybe it's symbolic for Jaina falling to the dark side

Heh. I wish.

Who said it was a "he"? Nice try. But Hâvok is speaking to Malig. It could have been Faybol, but I don't mind ruining that.

I said it was a he. Did you miss my big ramble? That?s my theory and I?m sticking to it. At least that line makes more sense now.

I should also mention that there are things that happen in the second story that were seen in the series trailer, but I didn't put into this new trailer because I didn't want you guys to know for sure when they happen

Bad, YK. You?re already driving us crazy enough.

It's a face with brown hair. Does that help?

A little, actually. Wasn?t Anakin supposed to take after granddaddy more and have blondish-hair?

The only thing that makes me laugh about it is when people are convinced I'm using reverse reverse psychology

Good. You only need to start getting concerned if we start spouting theories about reverse reverse reverse psychology.

Is this a ploy to get me to PM you details again?

I may ask, but it?s just a tease. I?m not the type of person that can read the last few pages of a mystery novel and then go back and read the whole thing.

The author of another epic fanfiction I tuned into daily that just wrapped up a few weeks ago offered to reveal the major plot points half-way through the series (midway through story four of a seven part story that got longer with each ?book?). As many cliffhangers as there were, I never even thought about asking for the information. It would just ruin the story, you know? There?s always time to go back and read the story a second time if you want to look closer for the hints that were dropped along the way.

But this story (in its evolutions) has been at the very top of bookmarks for at least a year now. Probably longer. Just trying to display my enthusiasm.

Aero Gin; bounty hunter (female, unknown species)

Does she even have a species anymore?

Faybol; Darth Malig's Hand (male Kuhr)

Nothing new, but something about seeing it written like that gives me chills. (Or it might just be the temperature.)

Isolder; Hapan Prince (male human)

Hey! He is still alive!

Luke Skywalker; Jedi Master (male human)

Sheesh. Compared to Renin or even Jacen?s titles, Luke likes a nobody.

Vergere; former Jedi Knight (female Fosh)*

Bah.

Myrkr




Between the teasers today and the teasers for the upcoming Lost episodes, this has been a fun week! Can't wait for tonight!